As I touch
She shivers
As my lust is unleashed
She begs to plead
But somehow or someway
I’m hungry for pain
I’m hungry for her electric pleasure
I can feel the pain
As it ruptures through the fragile
I slightly remind myself
She asked to hurt, to cry, to lay
As I fucked her, as I loved her
As I got off, she screamed too
She smiled, and choked
Enjoying each button I broke
Each dress I ripped
Each seam I frayed
She scratched until
I bled like her
My back stings, my head rages
As time passed, I laid you out
I made you hurt, I made you cry
I made you curse and kiss the sky
Each time (in and out)
Each one (in and out)
I know you craved like I
But now, sleep covers the sheets
We slowly quicken my hips
And hold until empty
I tasted your black eyes
Each time (in and out)
Each one (up and down)
You smiled as I slammed
Your world
You cried as we came together
In your bed
Of love and hate
Of smiles and lies
Of lust and fate
Of painful eyes
Kiss me clean
For tomorrow is a new night
Author notes
This reality i've painted is all too fake to your world. the blood gives a forgiven touch, the pain is forsaken, and the love is forgotten.
Written September 14th, 2003
A contest entry
- Rise of the Darkness by Psychoticemochick.
600 points, ended June 3, 2007, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - -x-Whore-x- by xxRainbowDawnxx.
550 points, ended June 20, 2007, 22 entries
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This could almost be a song... I know how you mean sometimes we are just begging for the things we know we shouldn't want, the things that make our lives a mess. Just shows we always like what isn't good for us huh?
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Powerful. A really powerful poem. your a finalist.
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I love this poem, there was great power in the wording and it was very discriptive, you did a wonderfull job and I think this poem was wonderful.
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Absolutly superb
Wow very graphic and powerful work here. I love the line
"She scratched until
I bled like her
My back stings, my head rages
As time passed, I laid you out
I made you hurt, I made you cry
I made you curse and kiss the sky
Each time (in and out)
Each one (in and out)
I know you craved like I"
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good poem it was alsom nice work keep it up
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I'm in love with this poem
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I love this poem.
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i liked this. it was interesting... weird as it may sound... i can relate to the girl you wrote about... does that make ME shameless.. LoL... or is the poem entitled for YOU being shameless? Who is shameless? It was a clever title... though not sure who is the shameless one... is it just maybe the whole act? Anyway, I enjoyed your poem alot! It was very well written... interesting how it is fake in the end.... through your comments... it was very well written... great imagination...
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Your writting is very interesting. I have felt what you have written as though I was going through it. I've been there. It's deep and Its nice to read a poem with feeling. Keep it up.
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wow....i love it...i love this poem....it's so awesome....i am speachless truly speechless
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this is so...dramatic...and full of pain...and lust...and hollow grounds that love walk upon in madness...greatjob...i am...yet again so enticed...
"Am I Your Anything?"
*Aarica* -
wonderfully written. I shall read more of your work because your type of writing is amazing and i really enjoy reading your work.
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Kiss me clean
for tomorrow is a new night
son of a bitch you did it again. your fuckin awsome!!! i love your work. please dont stop... your like a new drug that has my draw hopelessly. amazing work yet again.
Dizzy
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