I found my way back to you
I found my way
A way back into your arms
I read between the lines
Of a poem of your life
And spoke in whispered tones
Just to hear your words
That echoed through me
In rhythm and grace
Whenever you said my name
It sent me searching once again
For words more beautiful
I found my way back to you
I found my way
A way back into your arms
For words more beautiful
Than the poetry of your smile
While I count the beating of my heart
That whispers how much I love you
And while you sleep
I feel your eyes watching me
In dreams that linger
For words more beautiful
I found my way back to you
I found my way
A way back into your arms
Author notes
Choice 1
A contest entry
- ANYTHNG GOES! by jamesmike99.
550 points, ended September 1, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - challenge. by Hermit Risin.
300 points, ended August 28, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Love by live in love.
500 points, ended October 9, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Believe in Love by Star Shine.
450 points, ended October 9, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Fall In Love by piccola.
1000 points, ended October 14, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Found It! Have you? by Nicole Cudworth.
900 points, ended November 6, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Beautiful Lady by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 19, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Serenade by second-born.
600 points, ended November 23, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AP Boyfriend by leslielovesthomas.
300 points, ended November 21, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - LOVE: Made for Each Other by Shenanigans.
1000 points, ended December 15, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your BEST........ by islekine.
600 points, ended January 4, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Poems by LissaRox.
550 points, ended March 18, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Heart 's Music Is My Song. by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended April 13, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Poems for me and my boyfriend by Chanson belle.
550 points, ended May 14, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Pre Write Party by rose petal desires.
370 points, ended May 28, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite only by kitty23.
470 points, ended June 6, 2008, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Convince her she's beautiful... by Sticks-And-Stones.
1050 points, ended July 21, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - misery loves company by solitarytear.
600 points, ended December 6, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romantic Pre-Writes by poets whisper.
700 points, ended December 13, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - LoveMeTenderly by ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-.
750 points, ended January 5, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - THE ULTIMATE LOVE STORY by bookworm987.
400 points, ended February 15, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tidal Waves and a Foggy Path. by HystericalHeart.
550 points, ended February 19, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love poetry by Reanna Eryn.
400 points, ended April 7, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - something beautiful by pineapple-eyes.
550 points, ended July 5, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write Me A Love Poem by Let.Me.Be.Dreaming.
400 points, ended July 16, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - helplessly in love with an a**hole by SkitzoSkittlez.
400 points, ended August 21, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *Amazing Beauty* by Beautiful Liar.
475 points, ended August 21, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Remind me there is love in the world by kay772.
400 points, ended November 21, 82 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Youv'e entered many contest with this one. This would be an Amazing song and beautiful write as well. Good Luck! I like how you didn't give up.
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I'm not a fan of repetition. I guess I should have put that in my contest qualifications. But other than that, nice job. Thanks for entering.
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Nya, tis interesting. I like the repetivness with your main stanza. Thank you for entering. ^-^
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Absalutly adorable. very beautiful, i also love the color purple lol so that may have won some points, but seriously i liked this alot. i also ahve a thing for repitition lol so yeah great job, thank you and good luck
xx
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I really like this piece and I'm sure Taylor will enjoy it too. Thanks for entering, and good luck!
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thank you for the entry
very pretty -
Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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Such a lovely love song. Well done for this contest. Best of luck. ~Pamela
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I really enjoyed this poem. It was very deep and heartfelt. Very good write!
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Very well penned.
Thanks so much for entering!
Write on!
*PEACE*
Happy New Year!
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This has such a beautiful, dreamlike quality, made more so by the repetition. I liked the metaphors, you may want to add some variation, but it is wonderful as it is. Great write, and good luck in the contest!
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This piece is such a heartwarming write…it lives up to its title…beautiful…thank you for sharing a lovely poem…
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Awe....this is sooo sweet! I really enjoyed reading this.
Loved it! Thank you so much for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest!!
Leslie -
nicely done with love. success in the contest.
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I found my way back to you
I found my way
A way back into your arms
This is sweet, touching, emotional, and very moving thank you for entering and best of luck to you -
Very lyrical... love to hear it set to music. Thank you for your entry.
Love and luck in all you endeavor.
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nice
this is nicely written i don't think it is as clear as it could be but it is still well written
good luck
lil -
verry nicely writen good job thanks for your entry
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Lovely, this should be a song, the repeptition works well to emphasize to your loved one how you feel. Thanks for sharing this creative entry.
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interest
i like this poem a lot it seems to be a little off somewhere i'm not sure where but it is still and amazing poem
good luck
lil -
wow. if poetry was what hallmark and ignorance has made it out to be than you'd be all set. this is almost a perfect model of the triteness that characterizes our society's conception of poetry because it's easy to understand: the meaning is just as stereotyped as its expression.
now maybe if we could take a stab at art........ -
aw, this is so...well...beautiful. Very fitting title I'd say. Goodluck in that contest.
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Truely beatiful
You don't have to search for words anymore beautiful, for you yourself have written some beautiful ones. The imagery is nice and the repeating part made more sense each time. Great write...no, BEAUTIFUL write. -K8 -
so astute ...
there are some lyrics that need music and these would be high on my priority list! It is always a pleasure for me to read words that move the heart and any theme of love do just that. It is what makes the world go round, no doubt about it. Note that these kind of songs never grow old nor the thoughts that keep them alive! Very nice sharing! joy
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this is beautiful. i like this.
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beautifull
it is very true that you can never find the right words to tell someone how much you love them, and yet i feel you have done it in this poem, well done xxxxxx
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