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Shannon

You hurt me
So much
Drove me to the ledge
Tried to push me over the edge

You failed again, just like you always do
Nothing ever goes right for you
So you fake it and take your anger out on other people
Why?
What causes you to do this?
Never mind

You are pathetic
A bitch
A loser
A nothing

You lied to me, saying you'd help me
And I knew you couldn't
I toyed with you
But you didn't know it
I care about you yes
But I don't love you

You don't want anything to do with me, I understand
Want to wash your hands clean?
I doubt you can, for one reason my friend
I can make your life hell
You told me all your secrets
Secrets that I'm prepared to tell
Your life will be a hell

Think about what you've done
Don't come crying to me
You always told me to toughen up
Well, I have. And I'm over your silly trivial games
And your whining and bitching
Your 'help me!' cry falls on deaf ears now
I turn away and slam the door
Locking you inside your fears

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  • cutiepie1
    August 22, 2007

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    i liied this poem...it shows ur dark side and it was well written and i love the words u chose(did i spell that right)anyways...well done


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    August 20, 2007

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    *sings* "Don't cry to me... If you loved me, you'd be here with me..."

    Haha, this was bloody good, if you ask me... I totally picked up on that "Call Me When You're Sober" vibe, and I LOVED it! [Amy Lee=Love!] Nicely done, good luck!

    Laura the Great


  • ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-
    August 20, 2007

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    Well well my love,, you have a drak side after all. Great job, it has nice pace,, and flow.. very emotinal and deep I love the anger you put forth!!

    thank you for entering!!


  • HeartbrokenVampire
    August 20, 2007
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    wat did she do?

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