The bathroom floor never looked so glamourous,
As slowly it tinted crimson with sweet little nothings.
It isn't a show without the shattered peices of me,
And the stains from what we called love|fucking|making
With your dirtylittlesecrets and the barbiedollskanks.
Baby I loved you before you became a myspace whore,
I'll never bleed with such glamour again darling,
I swore as I lay upon the tinted bathtoom floor.
You always built me up just to watch me fall,
Crashing down never looked so damn gorgeous to anyone.
Our love was always just tragic baby, |tragicly perfect|
And this love was over before it even begun.
I never knew how to exactly tell you, |i'vemessedup|
The mascara slips slowly down flushed cheeks.
I tried so hard to cling onto what I thought was you,
But really you were to....|youweren'taman|.....weak.
The needle in my arm doesn't hurt as much as this,
I'm still sitting here, clutching you're photo to my chest.
|breakmedown| just to watch me shatter at will, baby,
You had to do what you thought was best. |dirtylittleliar|
I'll never bleed with such glamour again darling,
I swore as I lay upon the tinted bathtoom floor.
With your dirtylittlesecrets and the barbiedollskanks.
Baby I loved you before you became a myspace whore,
Doll, was our love always this tragic?
Author notes
I feel crap.
So my poetry reflects my mood, unhappy, sad, angsty
Please tell me what you think
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I realllllly liked this, girl!
I think the repetition really worked here, and the bit about loving him before he was a myspace whore made me smile;
the first stanza was TOTALLY my favorite, but it was all really great, and it flowed together well.
you did an amazing job with this. -
'With your dirtylittlesecrets and the barbiedollskanks.
Baby I loved you before you became a myspace whore,
I'll never bleed with such glamour again darling,
I swore as I lay upon the tinted bathtoom floor.'
I love this stanza, but I swear I coulda put the whole poem in this tiny little box, it's amazing [=
♥
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wow this is amazing!!!! i love it so much!!!!
xoxo much love-
theradfreak
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God, Ima myspace whore, lol jk! this is great sis.
a beautiful tragedy
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*hugs you tightly*
I lub u gurlie!
So much!
Don't you ever forget how proud I am of you.
=]
I love the myspace whore label...its aweeesome!
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