Is it today that she lays here, waiting for just a little hope,
Or maybe is it today that she lays here just waiting to die.
This tastes just as perfect as your cigarette kisses,
And it burns as much as you're [iloveyou] goodbyes.
Nothing lasts forever, just like each breath she takes,
Crashing down just so you're grinding you're hips.
Against burnt skin, kisses left with butterflies & angst,
Drink the poision dripping down from overused lips.
Scars of betrayal and dirtylittlesecrets line her arms,
Another pixie dust adrenaline hit becomes a rush.
Reading old text messages [Areyoucryingyet,doll?]
This so called first love was nothing other than a crush.
Lying on the bathroom floor, passed out with such glamour,
Pixie dust injected into bleeding veins brings no t.h.r.i.l.l.
Shooting like stars through veins, breaking under pressure,
Injected the p e r f e c t d o s a g e, enough to k.i.l.l.
Dead at the scene with the needle in her arm,
Razorblades hidden (wrappedintissue) beside her heart.
Tasting mascara floods that run down onto her lips.
Couldn't break|smash|destroy her without doing some harm.
Deepest secrets emerge of dirtylittlesecrets and iloveyous,
Heartbreak never looked so gorgeous to anyone |warningshe'sfrail|
Back to the days where size 0 jeans were everything,
Nobody cares about a teenage junkie who was told to fail.
Ended her perfectly catastrophic life just to be another statistic,
She had to be rid of this gorgeously glamourous life |had to go|
Or maybe she needed a tragic ending to this fairytale lifestyle,
Another toxic love to hit our airwaves, |Miss juliet and Romeo|
|W h y s.h.o.u.l.d t h e m.e.n a l w a y s c.o.m.e f i r s t a.n.y.w.a.y.s?|
Author notes
drug cocktail
Dirty Pretty option,
Plus Drug Overdose option.
A contest entry
- Candy Coated Lies && Acid Tears by ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-.
425 points, ended August 23, 2007, 16 entries
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"Deepest secrets emerge of dirtylittlesecrets and iloveyous,
Heartbreak never looked so gorgeous to anyone |warningshe'sfrail|
Back to the days where size 0 jeans were everything,
Nobody cares about a teenage junkie who was told to fail.
Ended her perfectly catastrophic life just to be another statistic,
She had to be rid of this gorgeously glamourous life |had to go|
Or maybe she needed a tragic ending to this fairytale lifestyle,
Another toxic love to hit our airwaves, |Miss juliet and Romeo|
|W h y s.h.o.u.l.d t h e m.e.n a l w a y s c.o.m.e f i r s t a.n.y.w.a.y.s?| "
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This is soo sad.
Poor Juliet...i wonder if she could've turned to someone in her time of need.
Cos, im sure...that who ever her friends were, they'd always be there for her.
awesome poem Kitten! XD
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