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Someday

I knew in a moment
That you were wrong,
I knew in a day
I didn't belong.

I knew in a week
You weren't true,
I knew in a month
That we were though.

But then you called...

I knew in a moment
you are the one...
My life, my soul,
My love, YOU WON!

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  • mantis180
    September 11, 2007
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    This is quite nice. I like it

    -Ash