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Calling your name.

I see a blank peace of paper
And it's my life
there is Nothing I can write
Other than you and your love
I would rather bleed
than be without you
And I will feel the Love
I will feel the way you do
And I will feel the Pain
The pain of of eternal sin
You touch my heart in such a way
that all I can do is cry your name
Stacey I love you
My heart burns for you
Soul to soul we know
That this is how its ment to be
I would rather bleed
than be without you
And I will feel the Love
I will feel the way you do
And I will feel the Pain
The pain of of eternal sin
You touch my heart in such a way
that all I can do is cry your name
I love you 

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A writing.

A contest entry

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  • mantis180
    September 11, 2007
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    This isn't bad, I like the flow and the repetitveness, its a good entry.

    -Ash