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dirty little spoon

Made for dancing somehow

Took to the eastend chinatown
with a serious chunk of slave waste they called fantasy
with a chip on her shoulder that no weight could get under
with a sadness in her lips

no kiss could love better; noone could reach; nothing could touch

The swiftness of it all left her feeling bewildered
guys acting like it was strictly transaction
like the money would be useful
in wiping their juices off your life
like it'll ever even matter whose hand they grease
its the grease that has left a stain
not the man

It's not the transaction
its the need for the transaction
the impersonal method of  intimate involvement
that puts her there on the street

misdirected energy outflowing in every possible direction
flowing somewhat awkwardly in every deeper part of the street

dreams awash with grease all pooling up on the side streets
mingling with whatever waste is there
misdirected flow leading nowhere
this is a common place

With the toenails that so often need polishing

oh why the off-standing lady
with her blue dress hanging on for dear life
slinking around her shoulders and waist
a loose lizard skin
falling away
like the heart in her eyes every time...

one missed grab
and ahold again how she streaks in the window running past
allowed for a second to glimpse herself in that static dream
there is nothing to delight her
but that the dream waits somewhere again
and in the rain
her passing by, will find it
by some chance
in some great dress meant for clinging and removing easily..
like her dreams..
she will find the coil of her heart made for dancing
somehow

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  • white stone
    October 9, 2007

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    Very gritty and dirty and close to a sad reality. I like the personification of the dress and the underlayers of emotion. Sad.


  • quantumsurveyor
    October 9, 2007

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    So sad and perceptiv yet, perhaps, just a touch of hope in life. A wonderful piece of work that touches the heart. Thanks for sharing this piece.


  • Exodus gold member
    August 23, 2007

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    Metaphor certainly IS your friend. This is brilliant, with some wonderful lines that really draw the picture in your mind. I liked your use of line breaks, they seemed to mean something, provide emphasis. Thank you and good luck

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