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oh daddy dearest

oh daddy dearest
why do you leave me behind
with a broken heart
wondering why

why am i still here
still living here with you
not knowing who to turn to because of you

living life day by day
is not the way
not knowing the day you will be taken away

Oh daddy dearest
i ask you why
why do you leave me here to cry
not knowing weather you will live or die

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  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    August 20, 2007

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    Great write! So sad but but so much emotion. I loved how u portrayed your feelings. I had to hold back the tears and i hope that everything in the future works out for you. Great write and good luck in my contest!
    MINDIE