Maybe in another time
In another place
We could be together
But not now
Not here
The world isn't ready for us
It wont accept our love
But their not the only ones
I wasn't ready myself
I am too young
You are just a baby
So live your life kid
Find a new love
Maybe
In some distant place
A time not our own
We can find each other
But for now i'll say goodbye
I hope you find the one for you
Someone to make your heart
Skip a couple beats
Someone to bring
The warmth to your heart
Make your soul feel alive
As you have done for me
Goodbye my lover
Goodbye my friend
Author notes
Walking away a winner, walking away from a losing game.
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Hahahaa, this says so much lol thanks for your entry lol
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Please put.
I know where you are going and this is a very good piece and take on the subject, please edit and put Walking away a winner, walking away from a losing game in your author's notes. Because it helps to keep this one in the running. -
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there you go i added it
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Reading this poem is like reading a letter...and it pisses me off- makes me feel like a little kid who only yearns for people to see im as an adult...GOOD JOB!
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