Sweetheart, I think I'm choking
on your candy-coated-lies.
They sounded so y.u.m.m.y
I just gobbled them up without a second [thought]
Only to find, to my horror
that they were a deadly p.o.i.s.o.n.
As I sit here, g/a/s/p/i/n/g for breath
you simply laugh at me.
Your t-o-x-i-c lies are p u m p i n g though my veins
they are destroying me. starting with my oh.so.fragile ♥
But this is what you wanted, isn't it dear??
To kill me, baffle the world with my mysterious death??
You take one last look at me,
throw me one of those 'innocent' smiles
as I lie here
>suffocating<
on your candy/coated\lies.
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my dad again execpt he called me the liar all lies are poison dont get tangled in the web hunny you'll never get out love t my favorite part is:
'Your t-o-x-i-c lies are p u mp i n g though my veins
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Again, sorry about you and your dad...
thanks so much for your comment.
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Only to find, to my horror
that they were a deadly p.o.i.s.o.n.
stunning.
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Thanks so much!! Glad you liked it : ]
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Ah, this reminds me of my last relationship and how oh so pleasant that little experience was (grrrrrrr) . I hate lies and false trust. This is really well written. I love it. You're a great writer babes.
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Awww. Thanks so much!! That honestly means a lot coming from you [seeing as how I think you are a wonderful writer as well] And yeah, def understand the suckiness of lying guys...
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Aw, I'm really happy you think I'm good at writing and yea, I've had about enough of lying guys.
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I'm glad. And, happy to finally have someone comment on my damn poem : ]
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Anytime you want me to read or comment on one of your poems just let me know and I'll be more than happy to do it because I actually enjoy reading your stuff
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Aww, haha, thanks, that really does mean a lot. Same goes for you : ]
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