Adam
I whisper your name,
I get no answer
Give my heart away
Relive the passion
Will you walk with me
To the ever after
We'll feel the fire of life
With just one cause
You, cannot walk that far, with out me
Will you take this life and fall?
One in the same, you and I, together
Awakened by a single call
Given life with beauty
You push me onward
Live forever
who cares what they say
We are together again
One in the same
We’ll feel the fire of life
With just one cause
You, cannot walk that far, with out me
Will you take this life and fall?
One in the same, you and I, together
Awakened by a single call
And in the end it all works out
Although miles apart we are still together
You and I with just one cause
A contest entry
- Poems for my wall by Lauren Noir.
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i really liked this
it was nice
im soooo sorry it has taken me so long to comment you
thanks for entering
good luck
and keep writing!!
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This is great
The idea was really good and I loved the inner core inside of the poem it was really good
It looked really nice, it really flowed well
And looked really gorgeous
I adored the inner emotions, it worked well
Well done, i liked reading this
Good luck
Thanks for entering -
Each poem I read of yours is better then the last. I loved it.
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This was better than Ohio Burning Skies, Rld. I think it showcased more story and it was deeper. I enjoyed this a lot.
I love how you write songs, Rld. I think you may go far yet, if you want to.
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Fanastic
That poem you commented on for me, is about a friend of mine who lost his battle with cancer. Thank for the kind worse.
This makes me think of a relationship that one's parents might disagree with, to the point that they pick up and move. And the struggle to keep it going grows. But so does the love. No matter the distance love can find its way. I can be awakened by a single call"
Awesome poem.
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Wow. This poem has alot of emotion.
The ending made it sound like you were writing about some type of long distance relationship.
Although it seems like there is a deeper meaning to the poem.
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wow
this expressess alot of feeling and love it is a great poem
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