Standing on a corner, or lurking
in an alley. Waiting for the next
car to pull up, taking a long drag
before stepping to give some curious
dude he pleasure for the evening
There are dangers, but they know
what they're up against. Better than
a Playboy bunny, but not a great as
stripper someone would say.The outfits
help to the imagination. The wigs, the make-up
the 4-8inch heels, only expand the fantasy.
She'll do the right thing and touch the right
spot to get you where she wants you. She is
in control and you have no other choice but
to submit
Author notes
i need help with the title! titles are always the last thing i do and always cant get one
A contest entry
- Cracking Plastic Spoons Reminds Her Of Nothing by Exodus.
600 points, ended August 26, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sounds sad yet realistic of today's society. The English needs a little work, it through off the flow, as for a title, How about.....
Corner Street
The Street
Rough Patch
Life's Pain
No Dreams
Forgotten Future
any of these I think would fit. Thanks for sharing. UNT
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the poems about prostitution
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Title suggestion? "Control"
I liked this as a take on the contest, you're not trying to make her into someone that hates her life and wants nothing more than to get out (which is what happens a lot of the time when one requests poems on this subject).
The piece itself flowed well, moving from one line to the other seamlessly. Thank you
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