all need help to be successful,
nothing can make it on their own
something so insignificant as a bee
can aid in [pro]creating beautiful flowers
A contest entry
- Theory Of A Thistle - Overnight Contest by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended August 20, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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And they help to keep our world beautiful, as misunderstood as the little bees are.
I like this piece. It makes me feel that I can make a difference even though I'm insignificant.
-Nick
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Congratulations on the silver. I can definitely see why this placed! This offers so much through visions and absolute truth. Fantastic writing to say the least
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You packed so much truth into this short piece.
You are so right everyone and everything needs some help at one time or another.
Great message within your piece here, thanks for sharing. Great job as always
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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absolutes in this short and pignant piece. It is true..no matter how thorny we are, there is something beautiful about us. We can not make it on our own..thank god for bees and things that are willing to bypass our thorny sides.
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graayeri
I logve your 'short'poems - they are as Jeremy0826 says: 'real' and 'real life'. Thank for sharing this with us - we so often neglect to see how magnificent nature is. -
What a wonderful piece you have written here!
Your words are so true to life.
Great job and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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