"No son should kill his own father"
You are not my father
So I can kill you
The thing that's stopping me
Fear of losing everything
Be glad that outweighs my hate for you
Why I want to kill you...
Your boasting of being strong
Your primitive attempts at making me fear you
Arching up, raising your voice, using swear words
"You know what?
Your sucky additude can kiss my Ass!"
"What additude?
Going to work to not do what I'm told
Working to pay rent?"
"You wanna fight?
Brown Eyed Bitch!"
I said nothing in response until you went away
But I thought alot
"You want to fight me?
I am not afraid
To use weapons
I'll go to the hospital even
As long as I eliminate you, permenately
Think I won't?
Try me"
I hate you, that's no secret
Your sight angers me
"No son's wrath should be envoked by the sight of his father"
You are not my father
Fucken False Father
If I kill you, I'll meet you in hell
If my punishment in hell
Is to watch your murder
I will, with a smile on my face
Just like I did when I originally killed my
FALSE FATHER!
Author notes
dedicated to my dad, it saved his life tonight
ostrasized
4.Vent. About anything. It could be a bad grade, a lover, an abusive parent, the fact that you have no money for drugs--whatever. Let it all out.
In a list
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I know its a rant, tell me if you've ever felt the same
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whoa. crazy anger here. thats nuts!!! but so good! what a great read. he must be a real jerk though for you to write this. sorry you have to deal with it!!! but hey at least you got a great write out of it! good luck in the contest!!
♥Rachel♥
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i need ur Ap name and option before i read this hun! ^_^ its only fair
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wow so ANGRY!!!
You hate ur false father..oh well....but what if you marry a woman who already has kids? and the woman is amazing but you're the kids' fake father and one of them wrote this poem about u? well...just something u would like to think about anyway...good poem...ANGER here is INCREDIBLY POWERFUL!
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Very powerful and angry. This is a really good write. Thanks for your entry.
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wow.. again a very powerful emotional piece that evokes very specific imagery. THere are no words. Great job
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Good write. Sometimes the Lord calms the storm sometimes He lets the storm rage and calms the child. Depends how much drugs is around. Hell is kinda tough on in the mind. Esaiah 43:2 said when you pass through the rivers, they will not sweep over you. When you walk through the fire you will not be burned the famles will ot set you ablaze. I am an angel fire does not touch me ever
ask my husband. It's very unique to be untouchable. I wish you tons of love.
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The anger flows from these lines big time. Think there are people we hate, but never have felt as if I could kill someone - might even wish them dead, but would not be able to pull the trigger myself. Liked the self talk in these lines - thoughts put on paper.
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wow!
such anger that is not unknown to this writer. perhaps not to my father but towards a now dead, abusive step-father. thank you for sharing your heart with me tonight. viyanna rosemarie
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no, never felt like that
but then I'm a woman. Think about this though - the face in the mirror that youhate will become your own
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stark, honest and way too raw. Got my attention.
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I've never had the erge to kill someone.
Certainly I've punched people in the face,
but weapons freak the hell out of me.
If you false father is really that bad
I'd find someone like someone from social serveses,
and if you really have a legal agrument
against him, get a lawyer and a cop.
But I think bodily harm will only keep
a bad process going, it's a long chain that
we can all help tie into a knot.
peace to all ~flight -
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now that i'm 18, i can't do anything, its his deed for the house.
So if i complain to cops the only thing that they can do is have me move out and i get to pay 1/2 the price for rent for the first 6 months.
So I'm stuck, since I can't afford an appartment. He's very confrontational and anything law related will result in me moving out.
That's one of those things that i fear losing, a place to sleep. -
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Yes, I can see your situation to
be very frustrated and unfortunate!
I deffinatly take advantage of my
home and my large family.
I hope that one day you'll be able
to find a friend to be a roomate or
be able to afford an apartment
of your own, I know we've had my
friends stay at my house for months
because of abusive or sick parents.
But just know there's always a future,
no matter how consistant the present it.
peace to all ~flight
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