I was six you were seven
we held hands and thought we were in heavan
we kissed on the bus and told each other we'd never tell anyone
we thought it meant the world that I called you sweetheart and you called me hun
then there came a day
when you had to move away
and that last night on the bus I told you I loved you
and you said you loved me too
we hugged and thats the last time I saw you
but I'll never forget the sad way you smiled
you were just a little child
just looking at you made me blush
you were my first crush
A contest entry
- ♥ Man, on the moon. by forbidden-colour.
400 points, ended August 26, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This- is really sweet
especially the last two lines.
So cute!
Thank you for taking time to enter
All my love.
Sophie
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kokobird25
that is so sweet. it reminds me of my first crush, but he never knew i liked him. then last year, we sorta went out but we broke up after we said i love you to eachother.
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Oh So Sweet!
This was so innocent and sweet! I loved reading it. It was gorgeous!!!!!!!!!!!
Perfect.
Castaway
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