Here I walk, along my way,
Near the ending of the day.
Moonlight glints off emerald blades
As the sunshine slowly fades.
No more song, of daylight fowl,
Through low melody of an owl.
The milk-white sphere lights my way
Here at the end of another day.
Hands clasped, hearts intwined,
No greater friend would I find.
Than you who walk with me this way
At beggining of night and end of day.
We watched the sun, go down together,
In fair and fouler weather.
Let this be forever night
To walk with you in silver moonlight.
For here you walk, along with me,
And that is the way I wish it to be,
For all, eternity.
A midnight stroll.
A contest entry
- Just Me...And You... by FlipperSwitch.
600 points, ended September 8, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow i really like this one i hope you win the contest this is in right now
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bit late for that but glad you liked it
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oh haha i didn't realize that
but you should've one
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The words are beautiful...but I admit I sense some repeatetiveness in the fall of night and walking under moonlight...never-the-less a pretty poem; thank you for entering.
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Excellente'
Now This Is A Fabulous Poem,Ravenheart... This IS So Rich With Endearnment, Deep, And Sad,Somewhat, But I Think This Is The Best One Of Yours, That I have Come Acrosse So FAr!!!! Love It..And No, I'm Not 46, YET, Either...lol.....'God Bless'.Love ya, Shirley shaw-raytown,mo.........................lol....U R Cute...
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I love this its got a good rhyme to it and wonderful imagery! Well done I can't wait to read more of your work! Oh and also Welcome to ap!
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thanx i just put a new one on so if you want go ahead and check it out
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