this is for you the children of love.
you are all so special.
in every way possible.
ERIKA so young and yet to Strong.
red is your hair.
it is bright like your spirit.
and studdorn as a bear.
CONNAR A.K.A bubba you made the name all on youer own.
your a big boy now.
you can help take care you your little sister.
i know you will.
and watch your moves and play games like you always did.
CHYLA so beautiful.
it must be hard.
but i know you can make it.
with those big big eye's
you are every one's Angel and never forget it.
they cold not have made it this fare with out your help.
LIL CRAIG with your video games.
you cold always play.
you are ow so smart.
and you should know you are.
you likes to fish.
and catch the big one.
SHARI the teen.
what to say about you.
there is so much .
i don't know where to start.
you look like your dad.
you always did.
you joke like him and that is oh so good.
and the bast part is you act like him.
i'm the same age as you.
i don't know how much you have bin throw.
i know you will grow up fine.
and help with your brother and sisters.
well i'm about done my story and thanks for lissining.
you know he is watching you.
like he always did.
a smile on him face.
with a joke to say.
well i'm done now.
time to say goodbye.
till some other time.
he loved you so.
and he still dose.
goodbye goodbye
until next time.
Author notes
this is for a contest. this is to his childrin. he died july 4.
yes you can save it and put it in the book with my name. i don't know if it is good enof to. and you might wont to check spelling
A contest entry
- RIP My Brother (Contest) by Child of an Angel.
475 points, ended August 20, 2007, 13 entries
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Thank you for entering my contest, this was beautiful, and perfected for his children. I wish you the best of luck and keep penning!!
Always
Emily -
oh a. and feel free to change enything you wont to amke it sound better


