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For Julie

As I think about the news,
I fall deeper into Blues.
The music helps some,
To dull the pain of what you’ve become.

What happened was so sad
But hopefully it isn’t all bad.
You have taught us something new:
What and what not to do.

Life’s what we make it
But not always the right fit.
The twists and turns on the road
Will soon, on day, lead us to His humble abode.

Only with His help can we make it.
With His help, the target we will hit.
We all love you so much
But you are with him and we miss you a bunch.

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  • Whitemaiden
    August 20, 2007

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    That is incredibly sad. I like how your voice has developed into the poem in this present piece. The flow is still rough but it's still good.