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Glory Bee

Natures prosperity
in minutae
enfolds every bee

tentacles tyrian
creature within
ecstasy of pollen

joy so shared
sacred
but hardly rare

virtue
of the nominal
purity of the plain

the thistle
in this heart
causes no pain

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 20, 2007

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    Oh, nciely done. You approached more of my thoughts in this piece. Soemtimes the greatest beauty and joy is found in the hardest of places....the heart of something tough, hard and thorny.