I got the shot gun in my hand again
This adrenaline in my hand pulling the trigger in
I got the shot gun in my hand again
I think this is a murder or latest favor for the world
I can't control this urge
Its pulling under and under again
But if this is the end than hold my hand
I never get through unless i pull the trigger again
Oh what a tragedy for your lullabuy
This is my last escape so I'll make it great
With a kiss from the bullet
Oh that blood is so dashing on you
Like velvet roses from your last romance
This black sky keeps on crashing
Is this shot gun my lastest burden?
Oh my gosh its so wonderful to pull the trigger again
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"Oh what a tragedy for your lullabuy
This is my last escape so I'll make it great
With a kiss from the bullet
Oh that blood is so dashing on you
Like velvet roses from your last romance
This black sky keeps on crashing"
very deep wonderful,, words put forth in these few lined,, a great work ,, very deep and emotinal,, thank you for sharing,, great job and keep it up
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