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Guardian Angel

So pure, with flowing platinum, silky hair.
Wings as vibrant and beautiful as Heaven itself.
Surreal eyes, the color of emeralds.

  Angelic maiden of Heaven, please protect me from myself.
Grant me thy blessings to uphold my lively hood.
Oh, guardian angel please save me from going down a self-destructive path.

  Breath into me the righteous ways to live.
Please, faithful servant of God guide me away from sin.

  ..I want to finally live in peace...

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  • Stardust-luvr
    August 29, 2007

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    well written and may you find the peace you so deserve my friend as guardian angels are here for us to aid and guide us from the destructive or sinister paths. many blessings always xxx

  • cherchezlafemme
    August 20, 2007

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    Extremely beautiful poem the kinda like to read and meditate. Nice flow and heavenly imagery. Angels are there to protect from a self-destructive path as you refer or from people who wants to harm you in evil snares you usually can foresee I do all the time thanx to my guardian angel.. and their love is amazing like no one. My husband is very supportive as well. Your poem is a heavenly breath. God bless.


    • Drimok
      August 20, 2007
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      Thank you so much, I really appreciate it, I haven't written any poetry in a long time, it was just a sudden urge to write and that ended up being it, I, myself also strongly believe in guardian angels, and know they are guiding us under God's gracious love, again Thanks for the review it means a lot