I want you
to hurt
I want you
to bleed my tears
I want you
to feel the pain I feel
I want you
to love me when I no longer love you
A contest entry
- Candy Coated Lies && Acid Tears by ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-.
425 points, ended August 23, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love, Pain, Revenge by Clear-Cut Crystal.
600 points, ended October 2, 2007, 15 entries
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525 points, ended September 3, 2007, 15 entries
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650 points, ended November 28, 2008, 46 entries
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700 points, ended July 29, 21 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well, there’s no mistaking the rage and anger in this piece. I can relate to this piece. You did a great job getting your emotions out here! Thanks so much for taking the time to enter and for writing for me. It’s an honor to read your work!
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This is an amazing piece.Thank you for your entry and the best of luck to you in the contest.Best Wishes .
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OMMG!!! you have no idea just how perfect this is!! every thing about this ,, is like i wrote it,, theres this guy that i am like this with,, like i hate him,, but i get so made when he dosent talk to me? make sence,, no but thats just the way it is..
but yea great job,, short sweet and to the point,, just what i needed
thank you and good luck
keep it up
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