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i cannot say the things i mean
i cannot see the meaning imbetween
the heart and the hand
the distance so grand
spellbound and lost
generous and cross'd
as the day becomes the night
all reason turns to flight
as the stars open something new
and something from me flew
i don't know  what to say
i want life to be this way
to love love
forget
all is lost
that i'm cross'd
the path of no return
o, how everything still burns
o, how my stomach churns
the loveliest feel
a caress, a kiss
i hope to never miss
as hope decries
the tainted lies
and tries
again

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  • Jiyo
    August 20, 2007

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    wait in the friggin car said Dumbledore to Hagrid as he made a last and failed atempt to leave the cars grasp and make his way to the door of the Dursleys home, number 4 privet drive, to see baby Harry, his passion for the child was so strong that he could feel it churning inside his stomach, or maybe that was the baby dragon inside its egg that he had yet to birth, but what ever the reason for his gastrious problem, he loved the poem aaaaaaaaaa because it reminded him of this situation he was in at the moment. Of course he was not remembering because he was living the moment at that exact second, but he would be sure to feel the same feelings he didi at that exact second in years to come whist reading the poem, again, and again, and again and again and again....and again and again, again gan