Opposition hides life's flow
where attraction is polarized,
buried in emotions of sought harmony.
Invisibly invincible, charges of heart
surge in undercurrents,
epitomized by knowledge.
Fuse souls and minds together,
bleeding sentiment of values,
the core being of why we are;
and uncover a destined concordance.
Author notes
Prompt: Secluded harmony
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In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie Craze for all 10 ~ 10~ 30 by blondone.
450 points, ended August 19, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh wow Storm, this is awesome. Very deep meaning and thoughts you have penned beautifully! Congratulations on the HM.
Jeannie
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Awesome,
Wow, what a piece of art, a masterpiece at that... Congrates on the HM, and I always learn lots when reading you.. One way or another, you draw me into your poetic places, and I just sigh for awhile.. Peace sweetie.. Much love, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo
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Loved the undercurrent of the poem!
Our certain destiny not like anyone else's!
Beautifully written - and very wise!
Good Luck in the contest!
Tang
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deep and powerful write love the flow and th eimagery great message thank you for this entry
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