Dirty cash in
Dirty hands,
A bloody basement floor.
Dirty men with
Dirty thoughts,
A knocking at your door.
Dirty mouths and
Dirty words,
A gun cocked to your head.
Dirty cops with
Dirty hearts,
They're gonna rape you dead.
Drip
Drip
Trip
Slip
The crimson blood soaked through your shirt.
Drip
Drip
Trip
Slip
Your face pounded down into the dirt
Drip
Drip
Trip
Slip
The final blow that stops your heart.
Drip
Drip
Trip
Slip
You were dead before the bloody start.
Author notes
I just squeezed any old thing outta me... I guess it wasnt that bad
Please tell me what you think
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intense words for an even more intense problem in society. Great job catching the attention and keeping it! Good write!
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Mr....Policeman....? **gulps**
LOL! Now you should write about firemen. THat'd be a good one. And no, it wasn't bad at all! Look forward to reading more!
Kaye (Gasp's 1/2 stepsister twice removed)
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now i feel sad and helpless
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Coool!
So direct and in the face monstrosity, on a plague of society that so few want to believe exists. Well done, and a great impression, sure to leave the reader wondering just what if I have the wrong place at the wrong time? Scary in its reality.
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very different...hard to understand, idk guess it needs more...idk lol. great job.
~!~keep writing~!~
~gasp~ =p
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