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Just the Beginning

Join me on a walk
my friend.
I'll take you down
to see the end.
Where losers soar
and winners die.
Speak-up
this is no place to be shy.
The people are controlled
by that man there.
They all work hard
for wages that aren't fair.
That girl,
she controls the earth.
Smog and dirt,
thats what we're worth.
Have some freedom,
they're just giving it away.
But get used to it now,
they're here to stay.

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I started this a few months ago and just found it today. I'm not sure how i was going to end it.

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