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Remembering the Memories

Etched in the back of my mind,
I can remember the wonderful memories.
The ones where I can say I am proud,
That was truly precious to me.

The morning was bright,
As I headed off...
Only to find out that my love was gone,
Out of my life forever.

She was the heart and soul of my life,
Looking both ways before crossing the road,
Following those to town;
Hiding when one looked back.

Hunting was fun,
She would catch mice and ground hogs;
Those caught and put in a bin,
Would surely be knocked down and eaten.

Out in the woods,
She would walk by our sides...
Wander off...
As a tree falls nearby.

There were tears shared,
A painful day when one hears about a death...
The first death that happened in my life,
A girl I truly loved.

Eight years ago that happened;
Thinking that the world will come to an end,
Life has to end eventually,
And that time was then.

You are my guardian;
My follower,
My protector,
And most of all... my love.


 

 


In loving memory of my beloved dog,
Tasha.
...I love you...

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~Dedicated to my beloved dog, Tasha. I love you with all my heart

Written September 14th, 2003

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  • Catressa gold member
    June 2, 2006
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    My prayers are with you Nelak.. a friend is simply that.. a friend..

  • alainasarkar
    January 9, 2006
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    I know how you feel as I have also lost two of my dogs. But your piece was really inspiring and I know that our dogs are somewhere in doggie heaven lookng down on us.
    Alaina


  • Yemassee gold member
    March 26, 2005
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    I too had a dog that I loved very much and when she died I vowed never to have another and 17 years later I've kept that vow. The pain is just too great. I feel for you and understand.


  • Nelak
    February 14, 2005
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    Comment that was gone:

    True Love Gal (im) made a comment on Remembering the Memories (reply):
    'This one was so lovely. Thanks for sharing this with us. I know you'll always remember your dog Tasha .


  • friendofsinners
    January 13, 2005
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    i have come across a lot of love poems on this site and never have i come across one written for a dog. also have i never read one that was so sincere and honest. could it be that one could love an animal as that of human worth? this poem rocked. i loved how you described the dog being with you and doing things such as hunting and being next to you in the woods.

    You are my guardian;
    My follower,
    My protector,
    And most of all... my love.

    this stanza, in it you give a lot of credit to her. again sincerity means a lot. awesome poem.

    love you
    micheal
    friendofsinners

  • jamesgirl2411
    January 8, 2005
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    oh ok im srry...i didnt kno...i meant to do that but it didnt let me...srry good job


  • PenguinsRUs
    January 6, 2005
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    it's always sad when you lose a pet, but when it's the one that you feel the strongst connection too, it's devastating. About a year ago my bird, Henry, died because he tried to follow my Mom outside and she didn't see him, and when she closed the door, she closed it on his neck and snapped it. I was already a bit tipsy from a rum and coke, but that made me delirious. I couldn't think straight, I was just overwhelmed by pain and sadness. Anyways, the poem is a beautiful tribute and I empathize with you for you loss. great write!

    Joolz~

  • lisajay
    January 6, 2005
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    i really liked your poem! i've never read one dedicated to a pet before, so it was cool to read it.

    You are my guardian;
    My follower,
    My protector,
    And most of all... my love

    that is soooooooo powerful!! that's one of my favorite parts. keep it up! great write!


  • requiempoet gold member
    January 6, 2005
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    awwwwwwwww how cute!! what a lovely dedication!


  • UtopianEyes
    November 13, 2004
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    Lovely

    Very well written. In the past three years I've lost two dogs. One that was 14 years old and at the time older the I was, the second was 2 when he died, he dided of a throat disease and I can still remeber going to the vet an hour or two before he was put down. He was on I.v. so he was hyper and energetic, he was his old self..and i had to say goodbye. All my love reaches out to you and your lost pet. I hope she finds her way over the rainbow bridge to meet you when you pass on as well.

    With all my heart,
    *+*UtopianEyes*+*

  • Master Clouds
    October 23, 2004
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    Beautiful piece about your beloved dog

    Nelak,

    Ohhhhh.
    I'm so sorry to hear about the loss of your beloved dog.
    I know they say a dog is man's best friend, think of it
    that way.
    I hope you understand why she had to leave Earth because
    it was her time to look after you.
    Never doubt yourself. You said this happened 8 years ago.
    Grief to me never goes away -it always stays in our heart.
    You my dear, look on the bright side of life.
    Even though she is gone, celebrate it.
    She would want you to be happy. But I am sorry that she's gone.
    Take care of yourself. Smile.

    ~Master Clouds


  • Enira
    October 14, 2004
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    That's a very touching and beautiful poem. I'd be devastated if my dog died. I am very attached to her; she is now 8 years old, and I think she'll live much longer. She's a Chihuahua mix, and they tend to live up to 20 years of age. I'm really sorry that happened to your dog; that must have been really painful for you. This poem came from the heart, and that makes it all the more wonderful.


  • Inner Glow87
    October 14, 2004
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    great write!

    Awwww, this made me cried.
    I can truly relate to this, except for my pet wasn't killed.
    But anyways, this was such a beautiful write and your dog must have ment alot to you
    Truly wonderful write, keep it up!

    -..- SayYouWontCare -..-


  • JenP
    October 14, 2004
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    Oh my gosh. I can relate to this, except my pet wasn't killed. Long story. Anyway, this is so heartfelt and I truly understand what you're saying here. Beautiful tribute.


  • SusanL
    October 10, 2004
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    Kalen -
    It is always hard to lose a pet. Esecially the one you grew up with. It reminds us that we are growing up and one more connection with your youth is gone.
    My childhood friend was an Australian Shepard/Border Collie cross named Wiggles... there wasn't anything we kids did that she wasn't a part of. she even learned to climb up in low trees to be with us.
    I can relate to your loss dear and after all these years I can still hear her excited bark as she met us coming down the driveway from the school bus.
    Remember these good times and remember how fortunate you were to have Tasha in your life, so many never have that.
    Your new friend
    Susan


  • angelica silver member
    October 9, 2004
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    Kalen, Tasher will always be with you, whenever you are down she will be there, it's hard to lose a pet, especially when you are very close to them, she must be around you for you to have these feelings, as Kris said, talk to her, she will hear you~Love you my darlin Kal~Joan


  • sidewinder silver member
    October 9, 2004
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    Huggles
    yes our pets are family.
    they hold a place deep in our hearts where they are always remembered> I remember a few that I've lost!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • MagicLady silver member
    October 2, 2004
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    Kalen,
    Sometimes a hurt is deep and it doesn't go away because the love is so deep. A deep love can be a love of a parent or a love of a dog. Those without pets, sometimes don't get that. They are part of our family. Part of who we love and trust. Treasured parts of our hearts and souls.

    The more you love, the more you hurt. Don't let that make you afraid to love again. Your poem was very beautiful with very good imagery. It brought me back to my childhood with my dog, Missy. We have two dogs now, both that I love dearly. None can take the place of that childhood dog, though. It is a different relationship.
    Cheryl

  • Deep Peace
    September 24, 2004
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    Tasha would love this

    Kalen ~I'm truly sorry for your loss. You don't deserve this. But life happens -everything happens whether we want to believe it or accept it. You hold the power in your hands. Death happens, yes, but our hearts cannot bear the loss. Its just... I hate to see you sad. I know we all feel it at one time or another, but not you. You are the one that hold us strongly, giving encouraging words. Tasha is always in your heart. If you feel sad, talk to her and she'll be right there and enter your dreams and the two of you can talk about anything. You told me about Sandy, what happened to him recently... well, ask Tasha to protect him and Susie, okay? Don't say things like you'll fall apart if one day they look away and Sandy is gone. You gave him a piece of your soul so he knows you are always there -forever. It is okay to cry you know. She was a great dog, huh? I'll miss her too. A great dog. I remember that when you were younger you would dress her up... in the hall when she was sleeping you would snuggle next to her and sleep next to her with her tummy as a pillow. It was a tough time coming home that day hearing the sad news. You walk in the dorr and she isn't there to greet you... hearing her paws on the wooden floor. That picture you drew of her though... keep that close to your heart. No matter what anyone says of it, it is a masterpiece to remember Tasha as an animal, pet, friend, lover and companion. I can't do this anymore... I love you, Kal. Just let the tears flow.

    Love you, Kalen.

    Bye!
    ~Deep Peace


  • Talia
    August 20, 2004
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    Thats sad, it is always awful when you lose a pet... I know what I was like when meme died I was in canada at the time and was told over the phone and not long after getting home, my other one died.

    So sad...

    Tell you what you can have my puppy... I won't take no for an answer.

    Beautiful tribute

  • pozo
    August 15, 2004
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    Such a sad write, I can relate to your strong familial love of a pet, this is a truly moving write. So sad, my regrets on her passing away but also so beautiful- one can tell she meant a lot to you. My regrets on her death, keep writing


  • Waste of Flesh
    August 2, 2004
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    420 stars

    That is a very good poem, and i can relate to what you are saying i have lost loved ones myself, whether animal or human. great write...........................................................................................................................


  • Timestruth
    August 2, 2004
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    I never had a pet but I do feel your love in this piece and it gave me a better understanding of what love is. It doesn't matter what age, what sex, mental compasity, or even if human or not, unconditional love is pure and i truely beleive that is what you two had. A great poem incredibly powerfull thanks for the read. I wish i had some wisdom for you but I'm probably too young to dish anyout just yet. my deepest sympathy for your loss. God bless


  • Srs107
    August 2, 2004
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    Wow alot of people only think of pets as pets and its hurts me to know that. I'm so happy to know that there are a whole bunch of people out there that actually love their pets. This was beautifully written and i'm sorry that you had a loss my dog is getting older every day and i fear he wont be with me much longer. anyways great job on this.


  • Samplette gold member
    August 2, 2004
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    This is a sweet and precious tribute to Tasha...I am sorry that you are still hurting over this loss. Our pets are not just animals, they are a part of a loving family.
    I hope you can soon think of only the good times, without feeling the pain and emptiness of the day you lost her, and those long hard days that followed. This was truly a beautiful write.
    Sam


  • Shadowygirl
    August 2, 2004
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    Ok wow this made me cry like a child that lost his fav toy , this is heart breaking and half way through I knew it was about a dog because it reminded me of my dog Sam he died like 2 months ago I had him for years *sniffles* beautiful job on this poem

    Luv April


  • torquebasil
    August 2, 2004
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    Very cute. It's so amazing how attached we can become to animals, and that we feel such a love and it just seems like they can feel the same things. Poetry is a great way to express loss and hardship, and I beleive that you do that well here. Thank you for sharing this poem.


  • ceegeeess
    July 14, 2004
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    beautiful

    Beautiful memories of a beautiful pet by a beautiful daughter of mine! Nelak, you are great lover of nature and animals. I presented a dog called,'snooty' to my grand daughter three years back on her birth dayon june sixth. The dog remains with me but she talks with it over phone. the dog dances on hearing her voice. the poem is really lovely!thank you my child!


  • date-magdalena
    June 23, 2004
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    i know exactly how you feel, everybody told me that it would be better soon but all i know and feel is more pain everyday. everyday i cvan't go up and talk to him, cuddle him, say i love you and just watch for hours, so proud to be his mommy. it's burning in my heart and for every day i wish more and more that i could see him again, say one last time i love you, i wasen't there when he died, he thought i've left him, i can't get over that i wasn't with him when he needed me and the relief to know that he knows i love him more than anything is this world. after that my friend gave me my cat nessie because i hated christmas and i kiss and cuddle her all the time, and say that i love her everytime i look at her, bgecause i'm afraid that she will go too. i hope i get better with time, and with you too, it's hard to love like that and loose it.. very good writing and powerful words that touched my heart...

  • Glory of Sonne
    June 14, 2004
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    This is very sweet, yet so sad too, and filled with emotion throughout it. You convey your thoughts and emotions very well through this piece, especially with the use of words and phrases that add so much strength, that many people wouldn't think to use for this subject, such as the whole last stanza.

    I know how you feel about losing a beloved pet in your life. I've always lived with numerous pets at a time throughout my life and I've loved each and every one of them. Unfortunately, it always seemed that everytime a new pet would enter our lives, one had to be taken away. Every year I've lost a pet, but sometimes two or three a year. I hate having to lose them and it makes me so sad to look back on them all. There are ones I've lost because of natural things, such as old age or disease, but there are ones I've had to lose because of some horrible circumstances. I've learned to cherish all the time I can spend with each and everyone of my pets, just like anyone else close to me in my life, for I can never know when they will be gone.

    You have written such a wonderful and beautiful piece here, and thank you for sharing it, this is the first time I've come across a poem dedicated to the loss of a pet before.


  • May 22, 2004
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    awww.... That is so sweet! Tasha sounds like a fanatsic dog. I am applauding this poem as it is so brilliant. Thanks for sharing this , I will be reading more of your poems

    pinkwhite

  • scubagirl
    May 20, 2004
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    this is cute and yet sad. i can tell by your words your daog meant more to u than anything. that is like my grandmas dog, right now she has hurt both her legs and she is very old, we want to do everything we can to makee her comfortable but putting her down would break everyone's hearts and we don't wanna loose her. your poem hit home. you get your emotions across very well. god bless


  • sogoodinblue
    May 16, 2004
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    that's so sad and sweet...i couldn't imagine losing my cat or dog. i really liked this alot. i think you did a wonderful job. you got your emotions across very well. i appreciate you sharing this, thank you. keep up the great work.
    Amber

  • Godwin
    May 15, 2004
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    I'm just thrilled to realize someone could be so closed to a pet to actually feel and say:'You are my guardian;/My follower,/My protector,/And most of all...my love.'I've read most of your works right now and what stands out is the fact that you're spiritually committed to anything you do.I think I've just stumbled on one of the greats on this site!
    Edited on May 15, 3:47 p.m. because ''.

  • punksterpink390
    May 13, 2004
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    very awesome and heartfelt

    That is very good...I lost my dog...we gt her ashes...but I still remember everyday everytime I would try to avoid her when she was sleeping it was just so hard...I loved that dog...and I wished she was still here..she was teh dog that saved my life when I was younger...she's the reason I'm still here...


  • Deke
    April 30, 2004
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    Nelak, this is a wonderful poem for and about a preferred pet, and a dog of course would be the preferred one. I have had many dogs some pets and some for hunting, but I liked almost all of them. My favorites were "Rock and Roll," they were a couple of beagles that I owned when I was a teenager. Katy, my bluetick, and Annie my redbone. Jill was another favorite beagle that I owned a few years ago, and when I was a boy--my family owned a collie named Wolf. He was my favorite cowdog. I loved all those dogs dearly, so I do know how you feel about losing your dog. I enjoyed the poem that you wrote for it, as a memorial.
    Damon D. Brewer


  • YerTweetyness
    March 5, 2004
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    Excellent and So Sad

    This poem is so sweet yet a tear jerker as well.
    I'm so sorry for your loss,
    I REALLY like the way you ended this ...

    You are my guardian;
    My follower,
    My protector,
    And most of all... my love.

    Thank You and Good Luck in this contest!
    Bless You
    Yertweetyness

  • Imp y Celyn
    February 29, 2004
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    So, so sweet. Your love for your pet truly comes through. I can only imagine how it must be to look back and remember all the joy and happiness she brought you. Wonderful, emotional write. Tasha would be proud.

    Cheers,
    Ennie

  • oneluckygirl
    February 19, 2004
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    Sorry, I couldn't read past the seventh line... I'm sure the rest of it is lovely, but I felt the tears welling and I just had to stop.

    May the memories and love, continue forever.

    Jane


  • Maureen silver member
    February 19, 2004
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    Sad but beautiful! Wonderful tribute! My niece went to pieces when she recently had to have her little white poodle named "Bear" put to sleep. Our pets add so much to our lives!

    <3 Maureen


  • JPLimin
    February 18, 2004
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    very beautiful write Ms. Nelak, our pets in life are our family to us all, and hurts just as much when they are lost, and we hold the fondest and silliest memories within the vaults of our minds always, wonderful tribute ... JP *s*

  • msjct06
    February 18, 2004
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    this was beautiful! aww my daddy died but i've never had just a friend die...this was so sweet...hence why i gave you the applause...what a wonderful job...and the picture was cute...how old were you then? anywayz good work je t'aime au revoir


  • poetryality silver member
    February 18, 2004
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    The day after we buried my aunt, we thought we had lost our dog, "Mutton", she wandered away and was gone for about 3 hours. We had everyone in the family out looking for her, finally my youngest son came into the driveway with her in the car, dirty and scared. I was hsyterical, and thought, "God why, why now?" Then I sat and said a silent prayer and the Lord brought her back to us. I never really knew how much I needed that dog until last week. She is nine years old and has cancer, I know she won't be around for much longer. Maybe this was God's way of preparing me. I feel your loss. I know how attached we can become to our pets (like children). This is a lovely tribute. Hold her memories close.

    Much Love,
    Renee


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 18, 2004
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    This is so sweet. Pets are part of the family, and the grief when you lose one can be immeasurable. You wrote a beautiful poem. I'm sorry you lost your dog.

    take care


  • RedLipsAndTattoos
    February 18, 2004
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    This is such a sweet and well-written piece, that expresses really well how much you cared for your dog.
    The picture is adorable, and I like the fitting title.
    Great write, thanks for sharing.


  • milkdrop
    February 15, 2004
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    Losing a pet is a very painful experience.. I have lost many myself.

    This is wonderfully tender and endearing. It is proof that love was not only reserved for humans to humans, animals can be just as loyal and important to us as a best friend.

    I am sorry for your loss.. what a wonderful poem though!

    ~Hannah~


  • angel of your love
    February 4, 2004
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    THis is a wonderful poem, i dont know what i would do without my puppy Cheebee...she is so special...there are times when i think she is human trapped in a dogs body..lol...
    Lovely poem..
    Tammy


  • darell
    February 4, 2004
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    Beautiful!

    That was a very sweet tribute to a life lived and passed on to another dimension. I hope life brings you as much joy as tasha
    has.


  • BonnieQ silver member
    February 1, 2004
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    Beautiful

    Oh, how I understand the loss of a beloved pet. My very first cat, Cissy, was given to me when I was barely 6yo. I was 24-1/2 when she died of natural causes. It was akin to losing a child. Pets are such wonderful examples to us of unconditional love: the example of which we should mimic with our fellow humans. This is a very beautiful tribute to Tasha: I adopt it for my Tasha, my very first ferret who died. Love in Christ~~BonnieQ


  • Pamela
    January 28, 2004
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    I've lost a few "children" of my own through the years...so this write of yours touched me deeply...
    I've had many people chastize me for loving my animals like children...and though i keep my thoughts to myself of those people..i say now....BAH! they were my babies..and as precious to me as my children..
    none of them could ever be replaced in my heart..each had his/her own personality much like a person
    My most recent loss was of my Rotty...Boss Hombre'..he was beautiful and part of our family for 13yrs...my daughter referred to him as her brother..lol..my kids were only 2 and 6 when he came to live with us..so they grew up with him..we were all with him as he passed in our living room..and even now i'm crying at the memory..
    i swear, sometimes, he's still here..i trip over him at times..lol as i did when he was physically in the home..
    ok..i'm getting weird...lol
    thank you for this write...i love it!
    much love & peace
    ~Pamela


  • Jaydess
    January 28, 2004
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    wonderful write. it is hard when you lose a pet you love so dearly, as i've lost several. it's every bit as hard as losing a relative, because they do become like a part of the family after a while.
    excellent write!

  • MollysWall
    January 28, 2004
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    This is so sweet... pets are so precious, the way their love is so unconditional. I could really feel the love in this piece Heres to Tasha
    ~M~


  • January 28, 2004
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    Heartfelt and honest

    You've expressed such pain in such a beautiful, and amazing selfless poem at the same time. It flows so naturally, a delight to read. I really felt like I had stepped into your shoes, at the time this was written. I'm sure Tasha had a wonderful life with you and as did with her. Wonderfully written.

    lynn xXx

  • Samplette gold member
    January 25, 2004
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    Tasha brought got as much from you as you did from her.
    It is a painful thing, to lose a beloved pet.
    This is beautiful.
    sam


  • In-fin-ite
    January 17, 2004
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    This is beautiful and very sweet. When I was a kid we had a few dogs and they all died or were killed and now I can't really stand actually having one. I just know how I am and I can not go through that again so I get attached to my friends pets instead. This was truly a great write that flowed very eloquently. I could feel your pain and almost see your tears and felt the need to spare you if I only could.

    Thank you for opening your heart and sharing these words with us.

    ~JayLynn
    Edited on Jan 17, 7:42 p.m. because ''.

  • silversong
    January 10, 2004
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    This was a beautiful piece that touched my heart. I lost my dog Daisy a year and a half ago, so I can sympathise greatly. We had her for almost 17 years. She was my best friend. I loved the way that your love for her shone through your words - it brought tears to my eyes. Very emotively and beautifully written. I found your profile off the side of the page, by the way - your name really interested me. What does it mean?


  • January 10, 2004
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    i am so sorry for your loss
    i have been blessed with two canine companions
    they are growing old now, like me
    recently, i was very ill
    not sure if i would live to see 2004
    and all the while
    my two furred friends never left my side
    they were there when my family was not
    they were there when friends were too busy to care
    i have experienced the death of loved ones before
    both human and animal
    and know how painful those partings can be
    for those of us left behind
    i find solice with remembering all the wonderful shared times
    and the hope that some day, we will see each other again.

    this piece brought tears to my eyes
    yet also smiles
    beautifully and emotively written
    well done!


  • Burning Roses
    January 8, 2004
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    You are my guardian;
    My follower,
    My protector,
    And most of all... my love.

    wow... i am so sorry, nelak. it must have been horrible. I have two black lab mixes, and they mean the world to me. I love them so. Wonderful poem, I am crying... Good job. I loved it!

    A and some s for you.

    ~~~Ice Vixen~~~


  • cherche -d -ame
    December 31, 2003
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    Everytime I read about the death of someone's beloved pet it makes me cry . They are so much part of our family . I love animals , and have been through that experience myself ....a dog and a cat died of cancer within one week of each other . They had been raised together , and were best pals . I believe that once the dog died , the cat just gave up This was 10 years ago . Right now I have one dog , two cats and a blue and gold Mc Caw . They bring so much joy to our lives and i dread the time when it is there time to leave to go over that rainbowbridge Your poem speaks of the love you still feel up to this day ,
    Reenie


  • Ahlyn
    December 31, 2003
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    I'm sure she's watching over you.. Somewhere in dog heaven. That is a terrible coincidence, to happen over such a young soul. I honestly believe that animals can feel, and I'm sure Tasha returned as great a love to you as you to her. She just couldn't express it in words. Keep true to your memories, and she will to hers. I enjoyed this piece, because our dog is aging as well, and she might not have long to live anymore. But all good things come to an end, as they say. Keep up the inspiring work, and keep up your chin. She's looking down over you, and barking!

    Ilse


  • December 30, 2003
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    If you have read any of my poetry about my Shih Tzu, Freeway, you know I love this poem and I have nothing but heartfelt sympathy for your loss. My daughter and I were talking tonight about that day which will eventually come when they are no longer here and how we will cope with the loss. Neither of us wants to face that. I had to have our Penkingese put to sleep many years ago and I still feel his loss. You wrote a beautiful tribute to Tasha. Treasure the memories. Irene


  • cherylline
    December 27, 2003
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    beautiful

    lovely, full of dedication and rich emotion, truly a wonderful way to express your feelings. lyrical and true, pours from your heart to the readers in the most touching way possible, you write with such honesty it is obvious you really loved Tasha.


  • wishintreeUK
    December 22, 2003
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    My heart really went out to you as I read your writing about your beloved dog "Tasha" People can and often do let us down, however, a faithful dog will always be just that.. "faithful to the very end" You must have some wonderful memories of your time together, these will always be with you, Tasha's spirit will always be with you too... You will no doubt think of the times you went walking through the woods, see her pause, her head cocked, listening... you would have known immediately that she had heard something, her body actions telling you just that... Out in the woods,
    She would walk by our sides...
    Wander off...
    As a tree falls nearby.     .. The day you lost her will be a sad time for you for quite a while, however, the happy times you spent together will far, far outweigh any sadness that is still with you at her loss... Remember, she will ALWAYS be with you You are my guardian;
    My follower,
    My protector,
    And most of all... my love.     A beautiful write... well done... ~~wishintreeuk~~ (Katie)



  • WishfulStar
    December 7, 2003
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    Oh, that is so sweet! It was really beautiful and sad, but nice to read.I'll bet you and Tasha had alot of happy times.
    I had a a dog named, Tasha, and the same thing happened to her.
    ~Gala


  • dlbrown
    November 26, 2003
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    I know the heartbreak of losing a beloved dog, so this poem touched me, I have never had to have an animal put to sleep before, but 3 yrs ago, my best friend, my loyal love, my sweet girl, lived her short allotted 12 years, and was suffering, she couldn't walk, I held on to Miss Teak, until it was selfish of me to do so, I had to give her up to death, but I'll never let her go. She is in my heart, as your love will be...forever. ( Teak was a chocolate lab, and the best dog I ever knew)*Di*


  • -13right-Eyes-
    November 24, 2003
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    This is really sweet, wish I could say that I loved my dog this much! Great write!

    Good luck, Best wishes,
    ~*~SuGaR~NeDeN~*~

  • oneluckygirl
    November 24, 2003
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    You are my guardian;
    My follower,
    My protector,
    And most of all... my love.

    My favorite lines, for they hold the key to the pain that comes at such a loss.

    Touching tribute to a very special love.


  • Night Eye
    November 22, 2003
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    I am not much of a dog person but I can relate as I have cats who I feel the same way about. I cried when my cat died... she was with me from every memory my mother got her when I was born she had been in my life for 17 years a change like that is hard to deal with and its just not the same without them. Its funny how attachemnts grow over time even to objecs that you have had for along time you get upseat when you lose them or they are destroyed, granted its not quite the same but emotions are a funny thing. I am sorry to hear of your loss.
    Huggles
    -
    Johnathan


  • trumpetfalcon silver member
    November 22, 2003
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    What a wonderful way to mourn, and to lift up your canine in memorium! You will never forget, but it will get easier. Thanks for sharing!


  • maryannde gold member
    November 9, 2003
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    I so sympathize with you... My love was my cat Bandit.. A beautiful long haired calico cat. She was 18 when I had to make the decision to end her life. Breaks my heart still to think of her. She always knew when I was sad..and she always appeared in my lap at the moment I needed her most. When my babies were little...she would run to me to let me know they were crying. When I was pregnant...she slept atop my belly. If I was crying..she was always..there.
    Because they ask so little of us... our love for them is even greater. I share your grief...

    Hugs...and my best to you..
    Mary ann

  • Deep Peace
    November 7, 2003
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    Wonderful tribute

    Nelak -

    What a poem.
    A great tribute to a beloved dog. I would have fallen in love with Tasha because she sounds incredible!
    Keep all the fond memories close to you.
    Never give up and blame yourself because life happens for a reason. We live and then we die. Simple as that. That may sound harsh but I mean it in a good way.
    Having those experiences with your dog make you stronger as an individual. Your morals are stronger too. You begin the question things and not take them for granted.

    Most importantly... to you and everyone else who reads this, always tell someone you love them. It doesn't matter if you can't say it, show it somehow. Make it count! Make each day worth living and try to make a change.
    We need that. We need to stick together and keep our loved ones at heart.

    Nelak, I especially enjoyed your last stanza when you said,

    "You are my guardian;
    My follower,
    My protector,
    And most of all... my love. "

    A beatufiul tribute to a wonderful dog you had named Tasha. Remember to smile because I bet she would love that.

    Take care,

    ~Deep Peace


  • November 7, 2003
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    When snort goes, it is going to be really hard for me to accept it. She is already 9, though .. almost. Well, will be in December. Medium size dogs don't live much past their early teens. And .. a year passes so quickly these days .. soooo quickly. I don't mind the quickness sometimes .. but when I think of her, I want time to stop for a while.

    She knows how to cross roads, too. She knows how to communicate, and how to understand. She knows how to laugh. And she has her own loves, independent of me .. fire-hydrant poetry, for instance.

    Nice tribute .. definitely.

  • rgrpaperboy
    November 5, 2003
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    The memories of our past have become such a treasure for this day in the present. In your case, your beloved Tasha has brought the day of tears for that tragic event to such precious memories of all the joys she brought to you. The time she and you had together were very precious and I am sure she is waiting for you as well there with all day long. The tears may flow yet, for this dear one but you have a treasure of all the memories that are so precious. God bless you, and thank you for comments on my poem, FLower of Life. take care, Rick

  • Beav
    November 5, 2003
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    Incredibly sweet...its great when someone knows their pet as a companion rather than just a pet (such as adressing the dog as "she" instead of "it"). Great poem its got a nice blend and balance of pain and memories.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 3, 2003
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    awww hun, I know this is a rough thing to go through. I had a dog I loved like this once, so I know what you are going through. you did a great job on this and it's a wonderful tribure to your trusty friend and confidant, my little pal kept all my secrets and looked out fo rme as well. I'm sure your's is smiling down on you and sending a hug for this treasured piece of memories.

  • sidewinder silver member
    November 2, 2003
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    I know what it's like to loose
    a friend
    that shares a love like no other...
    even though they fur
    ...
    still within their smiles...
    they find that special spot
    only for you!
    I did enjoy!
    Keep penning on!
    Bill


  • sweetgurl
    October 31, 2003
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    aaaawwwwwwwww.....that is such a sweet tribute to your dog....
    Beautifully penned.....I love my dog and would be
    so incredibly sad if something happened to him. Thank you for
    sharing and God Bless you~

    ~sweetgurl


  • queen Moderators member
    October 29, 2003
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    Excellent Poem

    I could feel your emotions. My beloved dog Rosco died 3 months ago. He was a daschound. I loved him more than i can say. Sometimes at night when i am almost asleep, it feels like he is next to me. I had Rosco for 14 years. He had more heart than most people could ever hope to have. I thank you for posting this poem. It was beautiful. A wonderful tribute for your friend. Queen


  • Scarlett silver member
    October 19, 2003
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    Aw! I know how you feel...Even though I'm more of a cat person...Still...Very touching! Awesome job! Keep it up and all that jazz...

    !~YS4e~!
    Scarlett

  • poetryality silver member
    September 23, 2003
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    Great Tribute!

    We love our pets. This is a wonderful tribute. I have lost many pets along the way, and I too have felt the hurt. They become so much a part of us, like kin. Life in it's precious essence is what I get from this write, it is endearing, and I am glad I stopped in to read. I know you have lots of fond memories and that is what will hold you, and help you though. Smile when you think of your best friend.

    Much Love,
    Renee

  • Pari Ali
    September 23, 2003
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    She sounds such fun, I lost my dog a beautiful female alsatian, I remember going to school knowing she was sick, and coming home to find she was gone. They leave such love and beautiful memories behind. A fitting tribute.

  • dlbrown
    September 22, 2003
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    I love your poetry, and this one I can so deeply relate to, I lost my beautiful 12 yr old chocolate lab Teak, she was the smartest, kindest dog I ever knew. It broke my heart, as animals can do when they depart. I think you are a kindred spirit, I feel your love of nature through your writing. To me there is nothing more important than reverence for life, all life, for we are children of mother Earth, a strand in the web of the universe, all strands are equally important. Thank you so much for you kind comments on my cat poems, they are in need of our help, big and small. And good luck to you also. I will add you to my favorites list, your nature poetry is very moving. Di*
    Edited on Sep 22, 5:39 p.m. because ''.


  • Kristina
    September 22, 2003
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    Well Done!!

    Wow, what a fantastic poem. You really captured your true feelings and emotions and I applaud you for that. It is tough when you lose someone so close to you, your best friend, that without them you get an empty feeling inside of you. I know how you feel because well you know. Tasha was a very very good, excellant dog. She will forever be in my heart. Remember the good times, even though it has been eight years. I still think about her and I miss her so much. All I can do now is dream about her with me. My life has not been the same without her as I am sure for you as well. But when she was here, those where the best years of my life. Never forget that! No one could ever replace her, and lately everything has been reminding me of her. She will always forever be in your heart and in mine. Wonderful poem and thanks for the memories. I needed to read that. I'm sure Tasha is looking down at you now and just smiling. We should look up and smile at her. Thank you again Nelak. I really appreciated that. You have a very unique way of expressing yourself and this poem shows that.

    Take care and be happy. The most important thing to remember is to be yourself no matter what happens in your life.

    Smiles always,
    Kristina

  • Inner Thoughts
    September 15, 2003
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    A great tribute

    Nelak,

    This was a great poem. What a tribute to your beloved dog. I bet she knows how much you really loved her. May you always go through living life with happiness... not regreting the past. Things happen for a reason, it just has to come to that. So never give up on life and what it has to offer to you.

    What fond memories you have of your dog, Nelak. I could picture it in my head.

    Hunting was fun,
    She would catch mice and ground hogs;
    Those caught and put in a bin,
    Would surely be knocked down and eaten.

    Out in the woods,
    She would walk by our sides...
    Wander off...
    As a tree falls nearby.

    It must have been painful to write... but it has been eight years. I've had that happen too, it sure feels hard, especially when you have lived with that animal for your whole life.

    Take care, once again, thank you for this poem -it was well done.



    ~Inner Thoughts


  • Agapetos00
    September 14, 2003
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    Wowwww I have gone through the loss of a couple dogs of mine and I remember, clearly, my reactions to both. If I had written poetry around those times I most likely would've written some poems but I didn't and instead ended up writing one very heartfelt story and some long pages in my journals. Good job with this poem. It reminds me a lot of the poems in the book "Angel Pawprints" -which are all poems and stories of coping with the death of a beloved dog. I love that book and this poem would fit in it perfectly. Good job and God Bless!
    ~Kim~


  • September 14, 2003
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    awwwwwwwww...........
    this is such a beautiful tribute to your dog.
    pets can have such an amazing impact on our lives.

    ~Clare


  • September 14, 2003
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    Always so painful when a treasured companion dies.. that unconditional love.. those eyes, that expression, the way the head would cock, ears flapping.. so much of a personality shared and given without a care in the world.. just as long as they are beside you.. the unspoken, yet understood communication [ sigh, I know you understand ]
    Nelak I had a dog, she was 17 when she died.. so for most of my life.. this precious thing was my confidant, my friend and the hours we spent together.. the secrets shared.. the adventures, and dare I say it scrapes we got into.. well anyway, the pain has remained and as much as I love animals.. I am unable to get another for fear of that pain.. silly I know but..

    Ooops I said way to much!!! Oh well!

    Jani


  • Etoile de Tir
    September 14, 2003
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    A beautiful tribute. I cannot even imagine losing my dog whom I have had since I was a child. I miss him so much while I am away at school. You captured the emotion of losing an important part of your world wonderfully.


    ~Mal

  • mina nagi gold member
    September 14, 2003
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    Aaaaaaaaaaw.... what a tribute to your loved one... in this case its your dog... when I was little, I'd two dogs... I still remember them... they were so cute and loving... I would play hide and seek with them... they never failed not to locate me... they were company... I spoilt them so much that they will sneak in my bed in colder nights... god bless them... thanx for sharing...
    mina

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