I walk down the street, looking down with short
glances. What had i just done? My hands, covered in
blood, or atleast i thought it was. My inner demon!
It made me do this...Childhood memories cloud my vision
The screams, growing louder. Should i go back?!? No, you
are innocent, self defense is your story. I pass a police station
My feet drift towards the stairs, my mind is no long in control.
A short middle aged woman looks me up and down. I hid my hands.
She touches her gun. I back out slowly and head for the door.
Two cops block me, I am barricaded in! I reach for my pocket and
Im shot on contact. It was all self-defense.
Author notes
death...dark...uhh..yeah ^_^
dark secrets....yea!
opt.3
The Superb Nerd..
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A mass of thoughts and lost innocense.
good write (:
good luck in the contest..
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interesting
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thank you for your wonderful entry in this contest! you are truly talented. points and trophies dont need that to prove it!
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Well,, I can say a few things,, its was deffinatlay,, original and differet.. Not what I was hopping for but good non the less/ I enjoy the toughts of inner demonds,, and death,, and self defence. Great job and keep poetry alive..
good luck
Kaydee -
I like it....it was so twisted and morbid. But I like it. It fits well and now I wanna go murder or something after reading this. lol. jkjkjk. I like it though.
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Dark and twisted, I like it. Fits good with the contest. I like how it's sort of a short story, but it's in the form of a poem. Just like BeautifulSorrow said, the ending ties it up very nicely.
Great job and good luck in the contest!
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Wow, this sure is long for 10 words. LOL
But, indeed, it is a very good write! rather scary even.
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crap! i thought it said 10 lines my mind is so screwed right now
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Oops, that was supposed to be triangles
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Prompt: Lurking in shadows (be creative) OR Trianges (be even MORE creative)
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