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Land Of Family Fun

In a land Far away made from bubblegum
Sat a princess upon her swing set  throne
Surrounded by Polly pocket maids three

Outside the royal zoo animals played dress up
Standing in line were the crayons and markers
Waiting to paint everyone’s face with make up
All the while laughing at the antics of the playdoh clowns

In the windows Charolette is spinning a chocolate pudding web
And the castle chef is making spaghetti bubble surprise
How anyone manages to eat this is beyond the hungry mice
But still they wait for their chance to swipe some cheese
While the princess learns to say thank you please

The monkeys are once again up to mischief
They are playing soccer with the queens poems
And the cats have lost the game of arts and crafts
Even the kittens do not know where to find them

A slightly crazy poodle paddles in the royal swimming pool
Getting her hair done by dozen unsynchronized doves
Inside all seems sane whilst outside Polly is reading
In this far away land a princess sits chewing vegetable gum
A place where Genna and her mum always love to have fun.

By Goofy Me
Kindredblood

Author notes

Ok I used all prompts for something different, this poems really goofy, odd, as I have no kids of my own I really was out of my depth, but I wanted to write something nice and funny, don't know if I succeeded, this poem will was hard to write but I am hoping I got it right, at least you all will get to have a laugh at my attempt.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    this was nicely done
    covering all a child enjoyed
    to bring a smile to mom and daughter


  • Melodies
    August 19, 2007

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    A fine and happy way to remember one's childhood!

    What a great poem to keep in a scrapbook to remember all the things you loved! Really darling writing, poet!


  • tawk gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    Wow and you used all her favorites too. Wonderful and funny write. Amazing imagery throughout. I so enjoyed reading. I know she will love it. Excellent write


  • Kindredblood
    August 19, 2007
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    eep fixed line lol, can't have the kittens running around lost without a reason


  • Dragons Lady
    August 19, 2007

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    I love this. It's very cute and funny. A bit of whimsical nonsense never hurt anyone. I did get a smile out of it. You have a wonderful imagination. Well done. I really loved it.


    • Kindredblood
      August 19, 2007
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      Thanx Always fun to go all goofy and write from the heart for fun, I need to that more. lol

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    I love this hehe It is very cute indeed think outside the box and wow did you ever. This will be place proudly in her scrap book Thanks for your adorable entry hehe anmd youmight want to edit quicky the line that says even the kittens dont know where to

    you missed a word i think it is find lol Good job with this poem

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