Give me your hand and i'll lead you
to place where the sunshines always
but the sky's never blue. Follow me
and i'll take you to a place unknown.
Be careful not to fall behind for this
is the danger zone. Frolic through
the grass, lay and look up high.
Let your imagination run free as
you gaze at the clouds in the sky.
Give me your hand and wish up on
that little star, and i promise
it will lead you to that place so far.
A contest entry
- would you come along? (closes monday morning) 8-14 lines by Matt Holck.
450 points, ended August 20, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Get Me Out of My Sad Place by KissMeGoodnight.
700 points, ended October 1, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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nice. love the happy ending.
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this so reminded me of two little kids, and one trying to lead the other to somethign cool they found, and trying to describe it without giving it away!!!!! its so cute, and congrats on the trophy you deserved it....cuz this is a very good write!!! and i really liked the from you used!!!!! you kept me guessing...so good work!!!!!!
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like running to a playground
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