I walk through wild flowers
Barefoot in mornings dew
Counting away the hours
Till I'm here with you
I bathe in monings glory
On our memories I dine
A never ending story
A love that outlasts time
I wait where are love grew
To go back to our past
This is where I made love to you
Upon a bed of grass
Soon you'll be in my arms again
We'll hold each other tight
Together we'll go back to when
We shared each others night
I woke again to mornings mist
I heard I love you
From the lips that I just kissed
And love that I once knew
A contest entry
- Fill My Pages by Cinnarry.
1400 points, ended August 20, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything goes by crystallynnbradford.
565 points, ended September 19, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter your best prewrite. by Anguas-Confusion.
525 points, ended June 27, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A really great poem, but I specifically asked that I not recive love poems. I'm sorry. I'm going to have to disqualify you.
Alyssa
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the beginning of the first stanza shouldn't it be "our" rather then "are"?? apart from that one small criticism, it is a good write, thank you everso much for adding it to my contest I really enjoyed reading it, I wish you luck in my contest and also congratulations for your honorable mention in a previous one. keep up the good penning. xX
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very charming....a little enchanting even
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Very sweet and charming. Thank you for entering
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Now this is a feel good poem my friend and I really enjoyed it I woke again to morning mist I heard I love you from the lips that I just kissed And love that I once knew...sigh...
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Very lovely here,dear! Your romance is so intense.Makes a warm feeling go through my body.Yet another great masterpiece of yours!
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each time you add something, i get excited ^^. this was beautiful once again. i love your style, and really look up to it.
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A simple and romantic
poem that made me smile
and feel good. I think
you filled Cinnarry's pages
well...
Love, Lane
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