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Silly Man

Such a wonderous thing
Love, happiness for all to see

silly man. stupid man, why dont you see

Smile and laugh. let all See
the world, your life happy for all to see

Silly man, Stupid man. Why dont you see

Walking about, living, dreaming
COME AND SEE I AM HAPPY!

Silly man Stupid Man. Why don't you see

Tis all lies you believe
Honor is nothing, worthless you see
love, they dont love you, this is just lies
you gave them their wishes

now take their lies
they don't love you
not one bit

Silly Many, Stupid Man. Why can't you see?

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  • Dawliah
    January 14, 2008
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    I agree with Lish; despite you ever-so depressive outlook on life, it's your complete denial of the fact that YES people DO care about you that agrivates me so damn much.

    But your stuborn, hardheaded
    I wash my hands of your ridiculousness(sp!?)
    and leave you with this; you are loved, get over it.


    -Chrissy


  • Lish
    August 19, 2007
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    Despite your continued cycle of self abhorrence and depression, of disappointment and the feeling of failure; there are those around who still care about you.

    As always, you know how to write from the heart and paint pictures in the minds of your readers. Love may seem like an illusion when the heart is clouded by pain, but that doesn't make it any less real.