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Curtousy Given For Nothing

I have dreamed too much
because it never comes true
It's not worth thinking
of someone like you
I have wished too little
because I never receive
A hug of friendship
that puts me at ease

I have given too much
because i never get back
The things I sacrifice
are greater than that
I have spoken too little
because I'm not understood
There was always judgments
I "MISUNDERSTOOD"

I'm being independent
and nothing but that
Don't depend on others
they won't have your back
Later you'll figure
who your true friends are
Before it's too late
don't let them get that far





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  • scars-of-yesterday
    January 10, 2008

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    This is another good poem. Im sorry that again you have to wonder if some one is your true friend, but what can you really do? People suck.


  • stardazer15
    September 16, 2007

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    This is beautiful, it's sad that you have to come to the conclusion that you have to be careful who your friends are, but it's true. I love the flow, you're a great writer

  • Phoenix-Flame
    August 19, 2007
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    My poem that i thought has been my best but if you read my others you make the decision on which is my best