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Your Heaven Sent

Another day has gone by~
And still I sit and wonder why
Why did I miss you so~
Little did I really know
Time was of the essence~
And now I've just ran out
Conversations through the night~
And now I see what we talked about
You saw what I couldn't see~
And you saw your time was near
One wish you asked of me~

Baby girl don't you shed a tear
I'll be in a better place
No pain can find me there
For God will walk beside me
And share His tender love and care
He'll take my hand in His
And guide me right back home

For God is right beside you
And you will not be alone
I know you miss me baby girl
But Mommy is in a better place
Take a look into the sunlit clouds
And you'll see my smiling face

For My Mom- In Loving Memory Of her*
    Died Jan-27-07

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  • Honeydew
    July 29, 2009
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    beautiful write !!!


  • Master B
    July 10, 2009

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    Beautiful!

    This poem gives me chills everytime I read it! I still wish I could have met your mother in person. I love this write its very deep and you can see the love you and your mom had for each other!! RIP Ms Heather Burtney!


  • cazzy71
    June 22, 2009
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    Warming

    This is simply beautiful


  • DramaQueen469
    June 22, 2009

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    What a heartwrenchingly beautiful write... this had me in tears. Thankyou so much for entering my contest, and I wish you the best of luck!

    ♥ Maria ♥


  • XxSpoiledBratx16xX
    June 18, 2009
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    that was beautiful. I wanted to cry but i'm holding back the tears. great job


  • melodramatic emo
    June 25, 2008

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    oh hun this was beautiful it made me cry I miss her too we used to talk alot on the phone and she would tell me all about when i was a kid she loved telling that cake story to me over and over

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