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Chardonnay'

Plushness surround every thing I feel

constantly I turn and see you

as a whole I take on your silhouette

depths of the chemical balance inside

your passion is like aloe to a burn

rich in healing

my emptiness

leaving a permanent scare

upon the surface of caramalized skin

delicate embraces

of keen tingles

gaining more strength to carry me

to a place that I've always adored

climaxed softness

mildely surrounds me

pillow talks of silken words

spun like yarn

of the most valuable texture

flows through my ears

my inner thoughts of angelic voice

as whispers in the spring

blossoms fully carrying

your scent

endulged in my nostrils

I am satisfied

as the fire crackles

with a few sparks

that fly in the air

forming a crisp tone

as amber glows upon my face

this place...

I shall remember

Forever...enjoying the company of myself

the memories of you

as I end this evening of Romance & Blissful moments

a chilled glass of

C

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Thie piece is dedicated to a good friend...he knows who he is
Ephiphany
a glass of Chardonnay as a toast to today...

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  • Poetry and I Inc
    January 16, 2008

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    AHEM! *nonono*

    I'm sure 'he' does. :))

    Loved that line about being "caramelized"

    shows your own style

    of being different and

    challenging.

    Some things will

    never change, huh? :))

    Great writing,

    keep pennig!

    ~The Inc."


    • Ephiphany
      January 16, 2008
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      Thanks

      I appreciate your comment on this.
      LadyEphiphany♥


  • Desire gold member
    September 15, 2007

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    Wow!!

    HOT Sensual piece You have penned and what images to tempt and satiate the senses
    Each line draws the reader closer ~
    where one squirms in his or her seat

    Loved this!!
    my inner thoughts of angelic voice
    as whispers in the spring
    blossoms fully carrying
    your scent
    endulged in my nostrils

    Congratulations on Your HM


    Magnificent!
    Thank You for sharing Your Magnificent moment!
    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

    • Ephiphany
      September 15, 2007
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      Thanks Desire

      I apreciate your comment on this...enjoyed it very much and I thank you again

      Ephiphany

      Love the Group, thanks for accepting me


  • rainbow bi trinity
    September 7, 2007

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    i must give it to you mrs devil in disguise you really worked your pen with this write you alomst out did yourself.


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 6, 2007

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    wow this is an erotic poem that is just super, you did great with this my dear friend and fellow poet.

    Thank you for these words to really light the sparks of love

    Riftkin

    • Ephiphany
      September 6, 2007
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      Hey Riftkin

      you are starting to spoil me with these lovely comments....Im enjoying them, so please don't stop
      thank you so much, I am truly grateful.

      Ephiphany

      Thanks again for the Quickie yesterday, I had fun.


  • Mizz HighHeel Class
    September 4, 2007

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    this poem makes me not knowing what to say at all it was a great form of erotic expression you did a great job


    • Ephiphany
      September 4, 2007
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      Thank you Sexy

      I appreciate your comment on this, very much.

      E


  • Swan song gold member
    August 25, 2007

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    This is a very wnderful and lustful peice of work done with class. I enjoyed this read and will be reading it again


  • Blaque01
    August 21, 2007

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    This gurl is off the hook, i say ur writing seems to be evolving into this erotic sensual, sexual sort


  • Sedasia
    August 20, 2007

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    Bubbly

    Some people have very intoxicating presences don't they. This poem speaks to me of intoxication..beyond the conclusive Chardonnay.

    You are a very descriptive and tactile poet.
    Awesome.

    S


    • Ephiphany
      August 20, 2007
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      Thanks

      again, sis....you know I apprciate your support.

      Piff


  • Mykeee
    August 19, 2007

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    Nice flow all the way through. being a wine lover, I had to stop and read this. Love how you ended the chardonnay falling off the poem. Nice touch ~ mikeeeee


    • Ephiphany
      January 16, 2008
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      Thanks,

      sorry I overlooked ur comment, never was my intention, however I'm responding now

      Smooches
      CC


  • HaleyMary
    August 19, 2007

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    Beautiful write. I liked the part of the chemical balance. It made me think of love and the chemistry two people feel when they are in love. Keep writing.


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    August 19, 2007
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    WoW are you on a roll today.
    Chardonnay souds so, so good, even in the middle of the afternoon.
    Girl you have a way of ending a poem, so perfectly.
    This is a magnificent piece of poetry.
    Keep them coming.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • Marctheman
    August 19, 2007

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    A chilled glass of chardonnay sister, well you already know that's what i need when i'm reading your poems, i guess i'm reading this one too early. LOL somehow i don't get suprised no more, because i know your talent. now i'm at a point where i can enjoy you.

    great minds, do great things


    • Ephiphany
      August 19, 2007
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      Indeed

      they do, and I'm satisfied having you as a friend. Glad you liked it.
      E

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