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Wind Whispered

Wind whispered wrapping
Strands of starless night silky hair
Caressing a lovers lips on skin
Delicate and devoutly
In away that only the faithful
Could comprehend
Scent of velvet rose petals
Lurking behind eyes that only
See love and caring
The whispered pillow top words
Captured in an embrace
And held tight to hearts
Unfettered by misery or mistrust
More precious then jewels held in the light
Of a cloudless sky
The love between lovers.

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Gah I haven't written in so long...

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  • Apsinthion
    August 20, 2007

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    this is actually really good.. i love the imagery in it and the feelings of love..

    "The whispered pillow top words
    Captured in an embrace
    And held tight to hearts
    Unfettered by misery or mistrust
    More precious then jewels held in the light
    Of a cloudless sky
    The love between lovers."

    i knw i jst copied half of the poem in here lol but i really loved that part..

    great write..

    ~rana~