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defining poetry by describing those that peruse the art

and others related to or understanding poetry





shall appear in the January issue of Thick with Conviction:






http://www.angelfire.com/poetry/thickwithconviction/index.html
























Author notes

Eh. I've posted too much this weekend. It's what happens when one has limited time during the week.

I really don't write as much as my postings make it appear. Trust me.

A contest entry

ah. The link between this and "Legacy" is pretty obvious. Right?

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  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    September 1, 2007

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    Strong blunt and to the point, still quite "poetic"

    Thanks for the entry and best of luck in the contest.


  • MuddyKing
    August 24, 2007
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  • kirbysman Moderators member
    August 22, 2007

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    Thanks so much for your entry in the Allpoetry Extravaganza contest. Perhaps I too understand this one . . . perhaps. Best of luck in the contest.

    Paul


  • cvillelisa
    August 21, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry into the Legacy contest, this is one I can honestly say I understand
    and holds a door via language to a place I feel at home.

    Good luck in the contest.

    Lisa


  • Blkwidow77
    August 20, 2007

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    Consider it bookmarked. Simple as that.

    The first section was great. I loved the way you walked around the directness of your subject, but still manage to look it in the face. If that makes any sense.

    Or maybe it's more that I understand so well, the subjects of your focus, like the use of the word 'fuck'. That actually made me smile.

    The second section though, honestly, I wasn't as enthralled with. I think mostly, because you fall into some of your favorite words and images and I could see you coming. I like it more when you surprise me.

    Then we get into your third stanza and I'm in love with your writing all over again. Especially your first two sentences 'Poets steal. Poets lie'. For some reason I really laughed hard at that. I think it's because it reminded me of a few people around here.

    So I think that proves your words are not only accurate and truth, but garner reaction. Overall, just lovely, you pretty thing.

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    Anonymous entries are interesting - but I would guess this to be Annalise.

    This is rich and full, truly excellent.


  • Dienush
    August 19, 2007

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    Wow, this poem really really says the truth about poetry... I like how you worded it, too. Not one word more or less than there should be, and all of them obvious but not too much so. Well written.

    • Annalise
      August 19, 2007
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      Thank you.

      LOL I just wanted to write a poem that used the word "proliferated." That's such a great word, I think.


  • The Bear
    August 19, 2007

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    What to do when all the words are used up when they are spoken out and threadbare? make some more or use the ones that are hiding under the bed.
    You wrote about writing and poetry. And you grabbed it and shook it and the letters oozed and jumped like peas in boiling water.

    • Annalise
      August 19, 2007
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      Ah, yes. We must push past the dust bunnies and old, mate-less socks and find those words. We must, we must!



      Ah, thank you, my friend. Your words are always a pleasure to receive.


  • Rowan gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    "We have fornicated with every loose vowel & strict stemmed consonant"
    oh, loved that line.
    We are a bunch of word whores aren't we? lol..
    excellent thoughts in this, excellent.


    • Annalise
      August 19, 2007
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      thank you

      LOL Yep. Word whores. But with standards, of course.

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