A flash of silver in the dark, a healer of all things.
Surrounding me with crystal light, a memory with wings.
Transporting me to never land it puts me in a trance.
Whilst I am standing quietly, it asks my soul to dance.
The emptiness from deep inside creeps out and takes it hand.
Whilst dancing round the Universe, it gathers golden sand.
A treasure of the timeless world where miracles are made.
The echoes of my loved ones come to dance at my parade.
The wings surround me with new life and swirl me round and round.
My soul returns renewed with faith, it's found the higher ground.
Whilst emptiness was dancing I reached out to take it all.
Now I have found the answer, the redeemer of us all
A contest entry
- EMPTINESS DANCING by maa.
543 points, ended August 20, 2007, 15 entries
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well, i started like searching which part I would put here in quotation to show you my favourite part, but this just has so many great parts! amazing, I greatly enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing it.
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Many thanks.I am so pleased you enjoyed,
, Ros
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Wonderful
Very well done. A terrific collection of expressions and descriptions.
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a very beautiful and magic poem of a soul touched by the healing light of angels ... the playful sound of the words create a mood of lightheartedness, like the joyfulness of a heart whose burden has been lifted by angelic hands ...
very inspiring and spirit-filled ...
thank you so much for this treasure,
maa
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Thankyou Jin
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The wings surround me with new life and swirl me round and round.
My soul returns renewed with faith, it's found the higher ground.
I love this!! My kind of content. I really hope you win this contest.
Jin
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