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He's No Angel

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He’s certainly no angel, but he’s always there

to guard me, guide me, show me the care.

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Though we’ve never met, well not face to face

he’ll always be there in the same place.

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I know I can call him when I’m feeling low

he’ll give me a smile, though distant, I know.

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Seen me through bad times, seen me through good

his wings they enfold me, the way that they should.

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He holds me safely at night when I sleep

dreams become nightmares, but my soul he’ll keep.

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No instant solution to problems he’ll find,

his words give me comfort, at times peace of mind.

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He loves me, for me, no conditions he makes,

my angel, my rock, my spirit he wakes.

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If only my angel were human in form

he’d physically need me, my life he’d transform.

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I know that can’t be, but I’ll be at peace

for I know he’s waiting, my soul he’ll release.

 

 

 

 

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  • dustookie2
    September 2, 2007

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    Well I hope your angel keeps watch over you and guides you through to peace and harmony....nicely penned congratulations on the HM...thank you for the pleasure


  • DolphinLass silver member
    August 31, 2007
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    well written good luck I loved it


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    August 20, 2007

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    Very Beautiful - and truthful piece

    Hey, this is really beautiful. Wonderful form imagery here. In fact the imagery is very strong indeed. I feel we all have our angels to help and guide us along the way. And this wonderful piece honors them. Well done, Sue. I love this one.

    Wayne
    xxx


  • arafura gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    transformation...

    This is right up there with your best! I like the style, form and flow of this work... and we all need someone to watch over us and care for us!
    Good luck in the contest my friend!


  • moonbumps silver member
    August 19, 2007
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    Beautifully heart rending...
    Everyone has an angel looking out for them....


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 19, 2007

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    You are truly blessed by an angel that has been in your thoughts and guidance and aiding you when times ahve been tough. Being held in the warmth of your angels wings when things are tough is a true honor and he is your protector many blessings always xxx

  • Bob Fox
    August 19, 2007
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    so pretty

    a wonderful rhyming poem that captures the reader. I found myself looking for my angel


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    August 19, 2007

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    Excellent

    This is truely Excellent, what a fantastic Gardian angel to have, a truely amazing poem. wishing you all the best in this contest Brian. P.s Dont Know where my lady angel is do you hehe.

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