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~~~~~~~~~~~~Fate To Say~~~~~~~~~~~~

in this corner,
here i lay,
slowly dying,
and withering away,

the pain is to much to bair,
as i lay gasping for air,
in the next life there is no hope,
for here i shal surely choke,

the light is fading,
and death draws near,
theres no more hateing,
as i lay right here,

the soft vocie of the fates saying,
here you lay never waking,
as my eyes start to heavy,
i know i am just a baby,

because god creates and he destroys,
but keep in mine,
we are mearly his toys.

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  • Xx Secrets xX
    August 19, 2007
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    again nice write! welcome to the world of AP


  • raggyann
    August 19, 2007
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    this was oh so well written
    great work here.
    welcome to ap