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A Lamp Unto Your Own Feet

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I dreamt I was walking with Walt Whitman.
He was laboring over a poem, as usual.
He was broke and hadn't eaten in two days.
I told him that one day,
He would be admired around the world
And considered by many
To be the greatest poet who ever lived.
He looked surprised, then he laughed and said,
"If they knew what I've had to go through
To gain whatever abilities I have,
They wouldn't admire me at all."


When I heard you say

That your chosen art  

Was "just not good enough for anyone",
My first impulse was to soothe the ache,
To say something wise and wonderful,
To somehow find the right words
To erase or render meaningless
The innumerable moments that created that feeling.

But the truth is
No one else can save you.
Looking to others for help
Is what got you into this mess.

If the vessel is cracked,

Any water poured into it

Will run out,

Leaving the vessel empty again.

You must fix the crack first

And only you can do that.

No one else can make you believe
What you have inside is worth sharing.
You have to find a way to believe that
Regardless of anyone else's opinion.
Allowing others to define you
Is like letting the bartender drink your beer.

The reason you should write is not profound.
You were born and now you're here
And you have a right to be
Just like every other living thing
That walks or crawls or flies.

You have a right to create
Just like any other artist does.
In fact,
You have a right
To become a bona-fide Creative Genius.

But friend, you better want it
Because greatness never comes easy,
Not in any field of endeavor.
You will not be spared the agonies
That the Masters endured.

Maybe that's all this really is.
Your turn.
It's nothing personal.
This may be the first, the last,
Or just one of many trials
To see if you've got what it takes
To join their company.
To someday stand,
Shoulder to shoulder,
With Giants.

And guess what . . .
They were all told
By someone, somewhere,
At one time or another,
That they STUNK.
As Einstein said, "Great spirits
Have always received
Violent opposition
From mediocre minds."

And the truth is
(Here comes the hard part),
If you don't make it through this
And the other trials that will follow
(And they will)
If you feel so sorry for yourself
that you bail out
And end up spending a lifetime
Regretting never trying,
You're not an artist.

But if you truly are,
You will know it.
Talent always rises to the surface
One way or another
In spite of all adversity,
In spite of all the critics
Who never stood in the arena
And fought and bled themselves.

When they condemn you, keep writing.
When they applaud you, keep writing.
Live your life and be who you are
Without apologies.

Everyone loves praise
But we shouldn't depend on it.
Even Jesus was criticized.
Why should we be special?
Besides, if everyone agrees with you,
Your work is probably boring.

Buddha said, "Be a lamp unto your own feet
And do not seek outside yourself."

You don't need us.
You already know the answer
Or you wouldn't have asked the question.
You already know what you are meant to be
Or the desire to become it
Wouldn't burn in your heart.

A true artist is someone
Who is put into a dungeon for life
Then builds a glorious statue
From the mud at his feet
Knowing all the while
That nobody will ever see it.

What you would do
In your own dungeon
Has nothing to do with us.

Flowers in the deepest forests
Bloom exuberantly
Whether or not human eyes
Ever see them.

And even if some traveler
Happened to walk past the flower
At the height of its perfection
Would the flower wilt
If he didn't notice?
Would its colors fade
If he didn't pause to inhale its essence?
Of course not.  It would keep right on blooming
Because that's what it was born to do.

You should, too.

Author notes

The photo is of a heliconia I saw in a Maui rainforest last July. It reminded me of hands making an offering to heaven.

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  • AusStar gold member
    May 16

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    I'm sorry... i just can't help myself

    If a poet writes a poem in a dungeon
    And there is no one there to read it
    Does it still rhyme???

    LOL...

    Bex

  • AusStar gold member
    May 14
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    Amazing!!

    One thing is for sure, you are certainly curing me of my ADD!! That was loooooong, but well worth the read, in fact I've now read it twice, and I'm sure I'll be back to read it again. I've been thinking whether I care if people like my work, I care if you like it, and there are some others whose opinions I care about, should I care? and why should I care? My goodness the old brain's going to be churning for hours now.


  • Grieving-Willow
    September 6, 2007

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    Beautiful

    I learned this lesson from you. This poem is beautiful and something I have heard from you. I remember when I thought life would never get better and with that mindset I was right, and it took awhile, but I finally got it

    Writers should all read this because you are talking to all of us, and our emotions. Love you

  • Asdzaa Nadleehe silver member
    September 4, 2007

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    An absolute stunning write..I believe this to be one of the most wonderful walks I have ever had the pleasure of shadowing..

    And the truth is
    (Here comes the hard part),
    If you don't make it through this
    And the other trials that will follow
    (And they will)
    If you feel so sorry for yourself
    that you bail out
    And end up spending a lifetime
    Regretting never trying,
    You're not an artist.

    Excellent piece..
    ~A~


    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      September 4, 2007
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      Thanks, Asdzaa! So glad you enjoyed this. I really opened a vein for this one. The question of why artists do what they do - the compulsion and madness of it in the face of so much insecurity (over making a living) - has always been fascinating to me.

      Mark

  • astralshepherd gold member
    August 24, 2007

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    Mark, your work is always uplifting and encouraging, it is a joy to read this. I am sorry i do not stop by and actually say so, i kinda do a drive-by and forget to comment. i had some difficuly with the move from the first few lines of "he was" and "he looked surprised" narrative to the " When I heard YOU say " but hey, that's just me and my own way of reading.

    blessings and best wishes,

    ~richard

  • Devils Reject
    August 21, 2007

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    this made me feel excited when i was reading it! i LOVE this so much! you just went for it and you nailed it. this rocks

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  • Trellis
    August 21, 2007

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    May the Spirit Bless You!

    This is magnificent, Mark!

    It will be bookmarked and read often.

    As someone who has stopped writing altogether for various reasons - one being having my work ridiculed by people here who I trusted - who I respected and thought were mentors, your poem gives me a sense of hope for renewal of my spirit which had become quite disillusioned.

    You have a divine nature and I thank you for sharing it with us!

    Cris

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  • grannyeri gold member
    August 20, 2007

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    Sure like the sentiments you express so well in these lines - the flow and the vivid visuals that this brings to mind. Great way you brought the flower in the picture into the poem at the end - interesting title, and easy to read and understand.

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  • twinkling of an eye
    August 20, 2007

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    This is a good, strong piece. You wouldn't think the way you wrote it would fit as a poem, but it worked wonderfully well!

  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    August 20, 2007

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    No one else can make you believe
    What you have inside is worth sharing.
    You have to find a way to believe that
    Regardless of anyone else's opinion.
    Allowing others to define you
    Is like letting the bartender drink your beer.

    this is something that i have just learned. i have always let someone else determine who i was and for the first time in 42 years, i am me. thank you for sharing this most wonderful write with me. viyanna rosemarie

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  • DawnBaby gold member
    August 20, 2007

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    Excellent!

    Like a breathe of fresh air reading this poem, how true it is, I cannot imagine my life without the ability to express myself. I decided to read your work since it often inspires my muse, I think it worked again! Thanks for sharing the beautiful write!

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  • blaizenaway
    August 20, 2007

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    "Allowing others to define you
    Is like letting the bartender drink your beer."= Hillarious!
    I can sum up my thoughts on this poem in three words, full of wisdom. Great write and well worth reading

    . Rewarded 4


  • Heavens Child
    August 20, 2007

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    Inspirational!

    The heliconia is beautiful. I love the title you chose, it peaked my interest. You've created a well of wisdom in this piece and have sent a powerful message into the world. Congrats on the Honorable Mention, but I must agree with the others it's a gold trophy poem.

  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 19, 2007
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    I dont know why it repeated my comment so many times..lol
    Sorry

  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 19, 2007

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    I cannot believe that a piece like this was only awarded Honorable Mention. This was amazing. I read it twice because I just loved the message that it gave. It was full of support for those that doubt and feel uncertain about their capabilities. I write for my enjoyment and hope that I can give enjoyment to others but if not, thats ok..I have fulfilled what I wanted to achieve.
    I am going to bookmark this and whenever I feel down about myself I will reread it. Great job.
    Thank you for sharing..
    Soulful Woman

  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 19, 2007
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    I cannot believe that a piece like this was only awarded Honorable Mention. This was amazing. I read it twice because I just loved the message that it gave. It was full of support for those that doubt and feel uncertain about their capabilities. I write for my enjoyment and hope that I can give enjoyment to others but if not, thats ok..I have fulfilled what I wanted to achieve.
    I am going to bookmark this and whenever I feel down about myself I will reread it. Great job.
    Thank you for sharing..
    Soulful Woman

  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 19, 2007
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    I cannot believe that a piece like this was only awarded Honorable Mention. This was amazing. I read it twice because I just loved the message that it gave. It was full of support for those that doubt and feel uncertain about their capabilities. I write for my enjoyment and hope that I can give enjoyment to others but if not, thats ok..I have fulfilled what I wanted to achieve.
    I am going to bookmark this and whenever I feel down about myself I will reread it. Great job.
    Thank you for sharing..
    Soulful Woman

  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 19, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    I cannot believe that a piece like this was only awarded Honorable Mention. This was amazing. I read it twice because I just loved the message that it gave. It was full of support for those that doubt and feel uncertain about their capabilities. I write for my enjoyment and hope that I can give enjoyment to others but if not, thats ok..I have fulfilled what I wanted to achieve.
    I am going to bookmark this and whenever I feel down about myself I will reread it. Great job.
    Thank you for sharing..
    Soulful Woman

  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 19, 2007
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    I cannot believe that a piece like this was only awarded Honorable Mention. This was amazing. I read it twice because I just loved the message that it gave. It was full of support for those that doubt and feel uncertain about their capabilities. I write for my enjoyment and hope that I can give enjoyment to others but if not, thats ok..I have fulfilled what I wanted to achieve.
    I am going to bookmark this and whenever I feel down about myself I will reread it. Great job.
    Thank you for sharing..
    Soulful Woman

    . Rewarded 8


  • michellemybelle gold member
    August 19, 2007
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    Wow, so glad I read this! I know you didn't write this for me, but this spoke loudly to me. Strength and beauty come from within to shine outwardly, not absorbed from another. Powerful write and great pic, haven't seen a heliconia in a while.
    blessings,
    Michelle


  • klassy lassy
    August 19, 2007

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    Mark, you shine!

    All precious metals must be mined
    Diamonds are from coal designed
    Stems of thorns sweet roses bear
    To hold the moisture needed there
    What of Oak does the acorn know
    Until it roots, takes time to grow?

    Like every sunray lights the earth
    God's reflections show his worth
    Love knows its own infinity
    Yet complete, hath need of thee
    For mankind is Mind to manifest
    Without the Word goes unexpressed

    klassy lassy






    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      August 20, 2007
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      Hey KL,

      Did you write that? That was awesome! Seems we are on the same page again, eh? Absolutely stunning poem. Thanks for sharing it with me. And thanks for always being among the first to read my new poems. It means a lot to me.

      Mark

  • waydownuponjoy
    August 19, 2007

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    the honesty ...

    of sharing these thoughts shines through all and the advice is so compelling and serves to incite the "I can do it" attitude! Good work to a difficult question and I applaud you for mentioning the bandage of:

    "My first impulse was to soothe the ache,
    To say something wise and wonderful,
    To somehow find the right words
    To erase or render meaningless
    The innumerable moments that created that feeling."

    and then for going on with those gems that must be taken to heart before the wound can heal.

    Good, good, good! for you ... joy


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    Gold!!!

    Well done. I believe God gives every person a measure of greatness in one area or another but few ever find it. Few believe in them self and few try. As a result we live in a world full of mediocre people who all have the ability to achieve greatness in their own "art" whether it be writing, painting, or just being a plumber. To be excellent is a passion that few ever find. But you are right no one else can hand it to you, to become great at anything takes work. I enjoyed this work immensely. God bless you, Mark

    . Rewarded 8

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