In this Field Full of Flowers
i can sit here for hours
even with this gorgeous view
i still cant stop thinking of you
all around me not a person in sight
im hoping it will just be me tonight
are you thinking of me i wonder
then i hear the thunder
the rain starts to pore
i dont mind
i just lie there
thinking of the world around
sometimes i hope i drowned
a tear runs down my face
i clear it before i got to far
into crashing
in my dream that night i was splashing
in puddles left from the rain or maybe my tears
in my prayers i thank god i met you
and ask why he took you away
you just left me in the gray
but thanks anyway
In this Field Full of Flowers
Author notes
option 6
A contest entry
- A Quickie Contest...... Rhymning (720 points) 48 Hours Extending it a bit longer! by Heavens Child.
600 points, ended August 24, 2007, 47 entries
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Comments
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you need to check your spelling, other than that I really like this poem!!!!!
Thanks for entering,
Annie Shadows -
Soothing....
This piece just calms the body,mind,and soul...
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thanks for the comment
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I love the imagery of sitting in a field of flowers. That's something I love to do when I need to be alone and think. A lovely poem. Thank you for the entry in my contest.
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