Pain is in my blood
I carry it close
Always within my heart
It is hidden behind my smile
No one will ever see
I carry it close
So that no one can hurt
Except for me
Author notes
I've been having a pretty rough time lately, so I'm sure my poems are coming out a bit emo sounding. But this is how I'm feeling at the moment. I've got a lot of pain built up... Kinda feel like I'm going to snap... But I don't want anyone I care about to really know, because then that would hurt them too. Heh.
A contest entry
- For Poets With 5 Or Less Trophys Only. by Mercury Rising.
500 points, ended August 21, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You know, no matter how old, almost everyone has those 'Emo" moments when they feel down and they obsess on their disappointments. That's ok just as long as we bounce back when we can.
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Aww, see there, that is what am talking about emotions. I see for you I am going to have to yell from the mountian top
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Don't worry if your poems are EMO sounding, if that's how you feel, you should express it like you have done here in a very personal way. A really fine poem you have written here. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.
David
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Welcome to AllPoetry
vespasien
Your write and author notes remind me of me in some ways. It is strange how when we are at a low point about ourselves we still do not want to hurt those close to us by telling them.
Great write
I look forward to reading more from you
Enjoy AllPoetry
Stay safe
~Amanda
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