life
a endless nightmare
a never ending story
why cant i write my own life
instead of you writing it for me
he writes
i live
but i have my own chapter
he has no idea
maybe if he really looks at the story
he will see he made a big fucking mistake
one that turned me
to the shadows
starting to smoke
hope I'll choke
screaming for years
driven to tears
this chapter is printed
no turning back
in your story
I'm a little princess
wrong again
take a good look
read the book
you have a bloody little monster
sucks for you
but daddy
that's what you get
for writing someone elses life
i have my own story to tell
a story of hell
do you wanna read it?
you never hit me
never used me
but you never really knew me
you still write my life to this day
will you stop if i take my life away?
Author notes
this pretty much says my life my dad has been writing my life for as long as i can remeber...
A contest entry
- Pain In Poetry by Jadis Blade.
450 points, ended April 11, 2008, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell me about your family. by Zannah.
700 points, ended February 7, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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OMG! I LOVE YOUR POEM!
I LOVE THIS POEM! TO ME.... IT SCREAMS EMOTION. I KNOW HOW IT FEELS TO HAVE A LIFE THAT'S PRE-WRITTEN.... i FEEL THAT THE bible DOES THE SAME THING. wHY CAN'T WE JUST LIVE OUR LIVES??? YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB! KEEP IT UP!! -
amazing
wow, this is very good, and very haunting.
if you ever need someone to talk to, im here for you.
the only thing im suggesting is on the 8th line from the bottom you typed stort and i think you meant short.
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