On the other side of Jupiter,
there is a field of bread,
neatly stacked in rows
of all the flavors and spread.
There is the spring
in which juices spurt out,
where our purple friends gather
in the nights to camp out.
They lie on their backs
tired from sliding on Jupiter's rings,
count all the planets with their twenty toes
and search for the blue earth as they sing.
They love the lava
and rejoice in the heat,
for it is surely a dull day
with no hot rocks to rest their feet.
This side of Jupiter
all a replica of the other side,
with bread replaced by tasty five legged poultry
to cater to the non-vegetarian divide.
Author notes
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Very cute!

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Thank you
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I am laughing at the thought of it!
Delightful humor and the images are so very clever and bright!
Happy and SO FINE!
Oh, you smart poet, you!





