I feel your gaze upon me
as I sit here penning melodies of my heart.
I know you think I haven’t noticed
As you softly approach.
[why would you, I give no indication]
I love the sense of the chase.
Breathing in the intoxicating scent that is you
makes me weak in the knees.
I shiver with the anticipation of your touch.
[God how I love this]
Somehow you know all that I am.
I see this, feel this with your touch
As you gently cup my face
And kiss my eyelids.
[leaving me breathless as always]
As your lips caress my neck
I meld into your arms, hungry for you.
Feeling so vulnerable
& yet not wanting to change a thing.
[I can’t take much more of this]
Tasting each other greedily
always as if it were the first time.
Discovering every inch of our beings
bodies unite, our souls becoming one.
[No longer does distance define us]
N. Degready ~ August 19th, 2007
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*grins* Now I wonder who this was for...
'sit here penning melodies of my heart.'
Very pretty.
'hungry for you.
Feeling so vulnerable'
nice contrast.
'[No longer does distance define us]'
a solid end. I liked this!
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who???
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Well I just assumed... you and Perfect Imperfection being such good friends... *laughs* I guess not
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noooooo LMAO thats my sissy
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I know THAT! I just assumed you were writing it based on a story she told you or something. *laughs*
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wow! lol (I know I just said that in my last comment!) This poem just gives out the erotic vibe, but you do it very tastefully!! My favourite part was when you wrote "Tasting each other greedily always as if it were the first time". Very HOTT!!! I wish my man would get home soon!! lol! LOVE IT!
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Oh my my my *I say fanning myself* wow that was awesome! I love the way in which you wrote it. You are quite talented! VERY enjoyable read.
Jeannie
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thanks so much
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Wow...Twinny
I must say this speaks more than....yeah..than what???
I really think your writers block is gone for good and a lot of other blocks too
Wow..this is really very sensual...and I do hope the one who inspired you is going to read it very soon....
or maybe already read it
Keep those poems coming....
and I just keep coming back to read them
XXJeannette
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Thank you so much
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Wow! Oh Tasha - this is just amazing! You have opened up the entirety of your loving soul, and the longing for the one in which you speak. The imagery is so well composed; bare, sensual and completely exhilarating. I loved this one! Bravo!!!
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thank you so much hun
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most be very special to you, to make you speel your soul like that sister, this is the true definition of writting with your soul not your hand, i apreciate you for showing us the the deepper part of you.
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thank you so much my friend. i am glad that you enjoyed
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Oh my!
I came back to read the comments and it looks as though w may have started a buzz. I'm glad to have been a part. We will have to do that collaboration soon.
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i'm in!
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Oh wow - Who's a lucky boy then? Better not post this in advance, keep it safe and give it to the chosen one on the day, at the airport. That phone box might be handy after all. You could drive him to drink if you send it in advance and than where will you both be? --- You're a natural romantic and poet, Ms Tasha --- Your words start bush fires in deserts where little will grow. ----- Lovely, Thank you. ---- Sexy Romance is alive and well - with a growing audience ---- Ha - best not buy any slender vegetables this week.
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oh sir wattle, you always have this way of making me feel as thought im worthy of filling a book thank you for that.
Oh my i can't believe what you said about the veggies...
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Ohh. This is so beautiful, even sensually beautiful. You have a beautiful way with words. That last line...is this for hubby??? Either way, beautiful poem!
Wirte on.
~*~SP~*~
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thanks hun, actually inspired by a write that was entered into my contest...i took the last line from there, my version is sort of a response to his...
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Beautiful write. Very passionate. I liked the last stanza the best. It made me think of two people being happy together in life and feeling like the love shared never gets old in life. Keep up the great work.
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thank you for your kind words
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