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Fairytale Blossoms

I walk the bubbles of tar
popping through life's troubles
the blueberry lined cow path
narrows into stone

filling with tweeting natures song
passing through
to a fairytale of blossoms
petals of fairy dust

fluttering in the wind
where mind wonders to golden dreams
and rainbow visions
of pots of gold

to a never ending life of pleasure
and happiness
slowly I turn
and back into the tar I carry
my joyous peace to all



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  • tara wilson gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    I have no idea what 'tare' is?
    I liked this image here:
    "the blueberry lined cow path
    narrows into stone

    filling with tweeting nature's song
    passing through
    to a fairytale of blossoms"

    Thank you for your entry