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Kiss it

Kiss your dreams goodbye, honey
they went out the door
when I walked through it
leaving you there with
just your pipe and your shit.
I hope you suffer,
I hope you miss me with everything you have
that you realize I meant what I said
with everything I am
and I hope you realize that this time
I'm not coming back.

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  • Miss Belligerence
    August 18, 2007

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    wow, this was an immensely powerful write. It definitly got the point across with confidence.
    great job
    -gibson