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New Beginning

the empty spirit danced
longing to be whole
the love once was grand
feeling the dancing eyes
and charm of a hug
emptiness dancing
with the new found love
afraid to let go
and feel the warmth
of a companion
but yet it has come
the day of the reuniting

will it be right
or empty
the hollow shell I walk
is now opening into God's arms
this is my new beginning

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  • maa gold member
    August 20, 2007
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    a very beautiful and thoughtful take on the prompt ... thank you for sharing with us your dance of transformation ... I love the happy ending ... walking into god's arms is really the best we can do ... a very heartfelt write ...

    all the best,

    maa